How do u like this map

[chrihazz]

how do u like this map[http://s705.photobucket.com/albums/ww54/chrihazz/?action=view¤t=Screenshot_8.jpg](http://s705.photobucket.com/albums/ww54/chrihazz/?action=view¤t=Screenshot_8.jpg)

[dray777]

i think its pretty nice but im not an expert in mapping

[Alpha]

4/10\. Swamps aren't rivers, needs a bit more detail, and most trees aren't all the same.

-Alpha

[anasky]

5/10
To much detail, and a swamp doesn't normally has rivers.

[Alpha]

@[VB:

> anasky link=topic=41370.msg409753#msg409753 date=1238327740]
> 5/10
> Too much detail

No, he actually needs MORE of it.
Like differences between trees, etc.

-Alpha

[Drummerpete]

3/10

Outside of the water has problems because of the ground you used, need better transitions, etc..

[Baron]

Firstly your transitions from grass to path need more work… make them smoother and more varied in tileset usage.

Also you need something else in your details to break up the large open area this map has. Right now it feels flat and you really want to try and move away from that feeling.

[Hippoman789]

theres half a tree stump.

[yorty]

Half'a tree stump! river too small and WAY too straight. Rocks, flowers, shrooms and other things of sort seem to be "organized". The two smaller "trees" in the pond have their roots above water, seems very 2dish.

[Marsh]

Its not a bad map, but the stream is way to straight that was the first thing that caught my eye. It just goes right down the map. As other users mentioned the grass transition could be a tad better. Definitely a good start to your mapping career though.

[Bobbus]

It's a nice attempt at a swamp, especially for someone who's new.

Try making it a lot less squarey. The water, grass, and basically everything about the map screams "Im a square."

By squarey, i mean, make the edges less boxy. Make them smoother.