The GodFather Posted April 6, 2009 Author Share Posted April 6, 2009 Hello EVERYONE! :PThis is my current main menu GUI for my game…Any ideas how i can improve on this because at the moment.. i hate it... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Alpha Posted April 6, 2009 Share Posted April 6, 2009 Use correct grammar, for one.-Alpha Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
StingRay200 Posted April 6, 2009 Share Posted April 6, 2009 OMG WERE TRAPPED?The useless text around the GUI is, well… useless. Try using some textures to give it more feeling. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
The GodFather Posted April 6, 2009 Author Share Posted April 6, 2009 @Steve/Alpha:> Use correct grammar, for one.> > -AlphaCorrect grammar on what?The text on the outside is supposed to be survivors text written to emphasis the scariness of the zombies… Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
StingRay200 Posted April 6, 2009 Share Posted April 6, 2009 Okay, but is that what you would write on a wall if you're about to be eaten by a zombie?How about:ZoMbie (smudge) HelP! (smudge)Use smudges and stuff that will indicate that they have been trying to write it fast. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
The GodFather Posted April 6, 2009 Author Share Posted April 6, 2009 @[BS:> §tingRay200 link=topic=42010.msg418440#msg418440 date=1239055809]> Okay, but is that what you would write on a wall if you're about to be eaten by a zombie?> How about:> ZoMbie (smudge) HelP! (smudge)> Use smudges and stuff that will indicate that they have been trying to write it fast.No.. It's a popular used safe house in the city, and well their just scared that their peaceful city has been overrun with zombies and their families are dead Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
StingRay200 Posted April 6, 2009 Share Posted April 6, 2009 Okay, why don't you try and use font that looks like somebody's handwriting? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
The GodFather Posted April 6, 2009 Author Share Posted April 6, 2009 @[BS:> §tingRay200 link=topic=42010.msg418448#msg418448 date=1239056104]> Okay, why don't you try and use font that looks like somebody's handwriting?Hmm I'll do thatAny other suggestions apart from the text? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
yorty Posted April 6, 2009 Share Posted April 6, 2009 "Last Stand"? Stealing names lately? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
The GodFather Posted April 6, 2009 Author Share Posted April 6, 2009 @[SB:> Elephant God Yorty link=topic=42010.msg418462#msg418462 date=1239056862]> "Last Stand"? Stealing names lately?Who from? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
zade_o Posted April 6, 2009 Share Posted April 6, 2009 Idk, i get what you're trying to do with the text around it but it still just seems terribly awkward being there. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ddunit Posted April 6, 2009 Share Posted April 6, 2009 From here:http://armorgames.com/play/269/the-last-stand Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Posted April 7, 2009 Share Posted April 7, 2009 ya there already is a very popular game with that name Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
zade_o Posted April 7, 2009 Share Posted April 7, 2009 Oh also, the beware on the sign looks out of place because the sign has a different perspective and the word is straight across, and maybe lower the opacity to show some of the wood grain Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Posted April 7, 2009 Share Posted April 7, 2009 @Ghost:> Oh also, the beware on the sign looks out of place because the sign has a different perspective and the word is straight across, and maybe lower the opacity to show some of the wood graingood point Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Xavi Posted April 7, 2009 Share Posted April 7, 2009 All the text looks awkward. The sign just seems wrong somehow, it doesn't fit the rest of the gui. The text is really distracting from everything else, and the font isn't right.The blood also doesn't look very good, not very realistic, and it doesn't add much. The color scheme is also somewhat boring. I would actually recommend restarting on the whole gui, instead of trying to patch it up. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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