Benneton Posted April 9, 2009 Author Share Posted April 9, 2009 Hey people i made my first side scroller game sprite for some guys. They call themselves Magicide like a company or something so please this sprite is not for use.Im sharing it here so i can be helped on improving my sprite skill.So what do you guys think of it?Here is the png: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
xeross Posted April 9, 2009 Share Posted April 9, 2009 It's facing forward too much, not really good for side scrolling.Regards, Xeross Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Benneton Posted April 9, 2009 Author Share Posted April 9, 2009 i took the idea from this game called LaTale.http://file.mglatale.blog.shinobi.jp/latale-carrots36.jpgOn this game both their and mine are facing the same way. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ddunit Posted April 10, 2009 Share Posted April 10, 2009 Chubby looking, kinda nice shading, ugly face, not so bad :PRemove that grey rectangle on his chest, btw o-o Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
xeross Posted April 10, 2009 Share Posted April 10, 2009 I also think it's in an image format it shouldn't be in.Regards, Xeross Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Benneton Posted April 11, 2009 Author Share Posted April 11, 2009 Thats because this is only a preview. Why should i upload the .bmp when i dont want people to use anything. As a .jpg there is no point using it cuz of low quality. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nubzero Posted April 11, 2009 Share Posted April 11, 2009 The angle is fine, some people just don't know what they're talking about. Although he does appear to be rather Chubby and armless. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ddunit Posted April 11, 2009 Share Posted April 11, 2009 Fix the hands, now that I look at it again. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
L0lz Posted April 11, 2009 Share Posted April 11, 2009 His eyes are so close together. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
xeross Posted April 11, 2009 Share Posted April 11, 2009 We can judge a gif/png better because it isn't all smudged with jpeg compression.Regards, Xeross Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Drummerpete Posted April 11, 2009 Share Posted April 11, 2009 I agree with what the others have said. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Benneton Posted April 11, 2009 Author Share Posted April 11, 2009 Should i bring his left hand more to the right so it might look better? Ill upload a png too.Here is the png Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Awan Posted April 11, 2009 Share Posted April 11, 2009 Put the hand at the back a litle bit lower and hide a bit. And that hand doesnt move like the front hand? o.o The back hand doesnt need to show in the stand position. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Spirited Posted April 11, 2009 Share Posted April 11, 2009 Nice work but this is where you can improve: His face looks alot like Kirbys, his eyes are to small, his mouth looks like he's going :icon_surprised: and he still looks chubby.Hopw you can improve on them, :] but apart from that great work Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Benneton Posted April 11, 2009 Author Share Posted April 11, 2009 You mean the back hand shouldnt be able to be seen? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Awan Posted April 11, 2009 Share Posted April 11, 2009 Heres an example :azn:[](http://www.freeimagehosting.net/)(See the left 3 character)~EDIT: Its not perfect(when it move maybe, cuz I dont test it). You should try and change a bit if it look bad XD Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
makairu Posted April 11, 2009 Share Posted April 11, 2009 Not too bad, but as the others said, it could use some face work, that and the farther arm. For your first, not too bad at all. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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