Spirited

Nice work but this is where you can improve: His face looks alot like Kirbys, his eyes are to small, his mouth looks like he's going :icon_surprised: and he still looks chubby. Hopw you can improve on them, :] but apart from that great work

Thanks all for the quick replies. @Ghost: > the designs are like, extraneously visible and it would distract me and seem like a shotty website. I would probably lower the opacity of the designs. Yeah I think the pattern i put is abit to visible and worry that they'd only really look at that. @Crimson: > I find the background quite nice but the nav-bar is all wrong. Try something like… > [This](http://osc.template-help.com/wt_23471/index.html) - with part of the background shaded for the top and left normal for the bottom. > > Just an idea. I'll give this 5/10 - it's not quite there yet and to be honest a 'design' has a bit more stuff on it. Where do I place my text? And welcome to Eclipse by the way. Wow that template looks pretty good I'll try something like that, I know designs usually have more on it but I wanted to see if I was going the right way lol. I'm adding the text area later after I make theese changes and thanks Eclipse seems to be nice and friendly. lol [quote author=misagiwaffle try drop down menus or spacing things out. other than that great job! I'll try adding Drop down menus instead of my weird Nav bar xD that was the only nav bar tutorial I could find at the time. Thanks all for the replies once again I shall later post the improved sample. :]

Hi I'm Spirited, I was using GIMP again and got inspiration from a website I was looking at which funnily enough promoted Website designs anyway this is just my first basic front design later on I will add more sections to it like side navigation etc, Anyway I would like you to point of some things about it e.g. Good points + Bad points + things to improve on. Also can you rate it /10

Ah awsome thanks I'll start making those changes now!

@edache: > Nice style, although the text gets a little lost with those swirls in the back, maybe creating some buttons??? What kind of buttons would you recommend? :] @Fruitpunch: > i like it 6/10 > > needs more detail but very good for a first try What Kind of detail should I add? :] @Desiderium: > Change the font colour. Any idea what colour? Was thinking of a nice bright Neon blue :] @Smallbro: > i like the swirls a lot and the font but what are the tiny blue box's dotted around the place? What blue boxes? I can't seem to see any of them xD

Hi I'm Spirited, This is my first Login screen attempt and I'm using a programme called Gimp. It would be very useful if you tell me what I could do improve and also rate me on it. Thank you very much