Fabzy Posted October 21, 2013 Author Share Posted October 21, 2013 Been working on some of my old work, improving it, what do you think ?![](http://indiearmory.com/filehost/files/1aadd6410e8b4ec42bd6c975e998a32e.png)First try with new tiles in the map editor, a few little issues to fix but apart from that pretty happy![](http://indiearmory.com/filehost/files/ac0f12595ba9e0d0467f71c2ac353770.png) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Magdreamer Posted October 21, 2013 Share Posted October 21, 2013 Very good improvement Fabzy. The tree is too perfectly symmetrical though!The little character is so much better. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Vus Posted October 21, 2013 Share Posted October 21, 2013 Wow, much better, nice work! :) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Fabzy Posted October 22, 2013 Author Share Posted October 22, 2013 thanks guys, ill post some more up when i make it :P Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sealbreaker Posted October 22, 2013 Share Posted October 22, 2013 The old tree looks so washed out. The new stuff is a big improvement actually, good job!-seal Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Fabzy Posted October 22, 2013 Author Share Posted October 22, 2013 Update first post with new stuff Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Zexion Posted October 22, 2013 Share Posted October 22, 2013 I like your work so far, but I just think that it has no depth. Your shades are all relatively close together making your pixels appear flat and washed out. The tree trunk is nicely done, but colors could still be experimented with (though that is the least of the problems), and the leaves just look like they were flipped several times. They have an obvious pattern in the middle. I hope this helps you improve them :) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
jcsnider Posted October 22, 2013 Share Posted October 22, 2013 I think a little more variation in the grass and tree color would be nice. Overall though I really like your work, keep posting updates :D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Stava Posted November 9, 2013 Share Posted November 9, 2013 Heyhere's some critique from meWell since the grass is taller than the dirt, on the grass-dirt combining tile you could add shadow on the dirt to make the grass look actually taller than the dirt![](http://i.imgur.com/op3dZz9.png)I don't think the cliffs should be standing out from other tiles so much, it doesn't look natural, and the cliffs shape is really repeating and too straight.. so you could work on making the shape more natural and having grass on top of it instead of those rocks.. (perhaps leave some rocks that would be surrounded with grass or something in some parts as a detail)![](http://i.imgur.com/kllnMCO.png)(here's my lame edit) - here's some better grass/cliff connection tiles I did [Link](http://www.pixeljoint.com/files/icons/full/smallmockup.png)where sand is supposed to be covering the cliff bottom, you could add shaded waves of sand which would make it look more like the sand is covering something, and you could add some rock pieces that aren't fully covered with sand![](http://i.imgur.com/r6Nt6zH.png)other than that.. it's alright for nowI see some improvement in color choice between your old and new work.. the old tree isn't so bad, just the colors are wrong and trunk but the shape is fine..hope I helped you a little :-) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Fabzy Posted November 16, 2013 Author Share Posted November 16, 2013 wow really like the edits you did, i love the style on your cliff edit you did there, think this is the direction ill have to go.Thanks for the help tho, will really improve my work i think :) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Zortala Posted November 16, 2013 Share Posted November 16, 2013 I really like your tiles! Is this for your game? If it is that would be cool :D . Do you have any water tiles tho?EDIT: OMG im so dumb, there is water tiles :) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Fabzy Posted November 17, 2013 Author Share Posted November 17, 2013 They are for my game yer :), there certainly are water tiles :) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
hisherwin Posted November 20, 2013 Share Posted November 20, 2013 They are great.. Better than my pixel arts :D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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