Anna Comnena Posted December 5, 2009 Share Posted December 5, 2009 Second map has too many straight lines, and the heights are not consistent. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SHADERS Posted December 12, 2009 Author Share Posted December 12, 2009 hey peoples. i just made a new map.its a inn with a kitchen. enjoy and rate please, constructive crits only and no flammingi belive it is my best work yet(2 maps big so it might take a while)[http://www.freemmorpgmaker.com/files/imagehost/pics/87aa37a204eaae436dbec5b8e5f7674e.bmp](http://www.freemmorpgmaker.com/files/imagehost/pics/87aa37a204eaae436dbec5b8e5f7674e.bmp)sorry for bmp form. its 3 am here and im tired. night Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ddunit Posted December 12, 2009 Share Posted December 12, 2009 Main room is quite too large still. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
azkanan Posted December 12, 2009 Share Posted December 12, 2009 1\. You should split upstairs/downstairs into different areas, or, at least, opposite sides of maps so they can't see each other, and use warps.2\. Why would there be Fire Brackets inside… Use candles? Wallcandles? Your choice, though. Looks a little odd.~~3\. Why is there an axe in a kitchen? Maybe if there was a pile of wood nearby…~~Oh, there is.4\. The king/lord has an umbrella? Eh…Otherwise, I just dislike that tileset and the rooms are too plain on the floor. With custom GFX, you would be able to make floor decorations (Mosaics, carpets, etc). The floor is an eyesore. Maybe add some supports (corner tiles of that wall type in a 2x2 fashion). Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Adulese Games Posted December 12, 2009 Share Posted December 12, 2009 On the map of your coast line, look and make sure your cliff levels mach up to water levels. On the lower right hand side, you water level vs cliff level would mean that the water should be flooding the area below it. On your map of the Inn, I would suggest making it smaller. I mean, it's just too open and the walls are too crowded.4/10 Average- Adulese Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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