kwarz Posted February 1, 2010 Author Share Posted February 1, 2010 Whatchya Think, this is my first item, all **CONTRUCTIVE** crit is welcome[](http://www.freemmorpgmaker.com/files/imagehost/#f2f61e9de20b77e1638206c3449f8df9.png)Another: (lineart by Kreator[](http://www.freemmorpgmaker.com/files/imagehost/#95984428d00c10d3a9e3ad09c694dfb3.png)(its a sword)feel free to download and doom in Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Drummerpete Posted February 1, 2010 Share Posted February 1, 2010 Gradient shading is bad. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
kwarz Posted February 1, 2010 Author Share Posted February 1, 2010 how should i shade? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ruins of Hell Posted February 1, 2010 Share Posted February 1, 2010 Read [this](http://www.touchofdeathforums.com/smf/index.php/topic,53886.msg571703.html#msg571703) thread, Kreator had a lot of good criticism which will help you. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Squiddle Posted February 1, 2010 Share Posted February 1, 2010 Outline is pretty good, but they're right Gradient is bad. I learned that the hard way. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Pieguy Posted February 1, 2010 Share Posted February 1, 2010 @Pink!:> Gradient shading is bad.Yeah I would know :P Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
kwarz Posted February 1, 2010 Author Share Posted February 1, 2010 thank you sould, i re-made one with the line art kreator supplied you in that topic Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dark Crusade Posted February 2, 2010 Share Posted February 2, 2010 I also have a tutorial for sword making. =)http://www.touchofdeathforums.com/smf/index.php/topic,54337.0.html Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DFA Posted February 2, 2010 Share Posted February 2, 2010 its pretty good for his first item he drewafter reading kreator's tutorials i bet he will be able to improve it alothow does it look on other backgrounds? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Drummerpete Posted February 2, 2010 Share Posted February 2, 2010 The new one with Kreator's lineart looks more like stone than a blade. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
devilbleep Posted February 5, 2010 Share Posted February 5, 2010 I lol at how half of you have been criticized about gradient shading. XD Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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