World Of Mystery Tiles

[Guest]

Im working on a game calld "World Of Mystery".Im planing to make a fully custome game.For now im only looking for pixel artist and programmer.This is a map whit the custome tiles i made,but the sprite needs litle more work i made it fast only to show the example.

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[VitinhooxD]

tree is too tiny . sprite looks bad , and some things looks like hand drawing , water transition is too squary

[Guest]

Well thanks for the reply I will fix them.

Edit: ok i think now tey are fixd.But i still have to fix the sprite.

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[Guest]

Sorry for the doble post.I just updated the water tiles.

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[Yxxe]

The water looks a little dark to me. Maybe give a go at lightening it up a little?

[Guest]

Well i dont know i like it but here is an example how it ill look if i tone up a litle bit the color.The litle water sircle is the color before.

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[dimx]

The house it a little bit too squareish  to me compared to everything else, but besides that everything else looks awesome.

Trees look a bit to flat on the map, i don't know how you would fix that i have 0 skills in pixel are.

[Yxxe]

So the little circle of water was the colour before, and the new colour is the one at the top of the map? Tbh they look pretty much the same.

[Guest]

Well its like 0,5% toned up  ;D wait I sec I will tone it up a bit more.

Edit: ok i toned it up a litle more

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[ViViD_DB3]

Tbh, I like the new one you just posted. The lighter water color looks really nice.

[Guest]

Thank you now im tryng to fix the flatnes,so here is an updated trees and the house on the right.

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Wich house is better the one on the left or the one on the right?And do you like the new trees better?

Edit: I made a house whit a new roof.

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[VitinhooxD]

I can see the grid in the grass tiles…And the roof ... well they really need to be redone.

[Yxxe]

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> I can see the grid in the grass tiles…And the roof ... well they really need to be redone.

Yes. Try and redo the grass so we can't see the "grid". Try pasting 2 of the same tiles together and fix the transitions like that.

[Guest]

Ok i fixd the grass but i dont know how can i fix the roof.

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[VitinhooxD]

I can still see the grid.And you can fix the roof  by remaking it and making a proper shading.the lineart is terrible.

[Guest]

Here now i fixd the grass and for the roof yes i know what i have to do but when i try it just doesnt work idk.

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[VitinhooxD]

now fix the rest.The grid on the sand and the flowers  , houses..

[Guest]

The flowers ? Whats wrong whit them.And i awredy sayd i cant fix the houses.

[VitinhooxD]

If you can fix the houses you obvisiouly shouldnt be trying to make a tileset since you are not willing to take time to learn

[Guest]

I am tryng to do evrything i can to make them look better but i just cant.

[Yxxe]

@Raiko:

> I am tryng to do evrything I can to make them look better but I just cant.

Take a look at a few tutorials.

[Guest]

I lookd at evry pixel tutorial twise but ok i will see some agean.And awso now im making a tree after i make the tree i will try to make a new house whit new size becose the tree that i made is for 32x64 sprites.

[VitinhooxD]

Every pixelling tut twice?…So you didnt learn nothing.

[Guest]

Yes evry single one and no i learnd how to do shades ideas on how to make better trees grass clifs before i was wors.But i dident saw even 1 tutorial on how to make a house.

[VitinhooxD]

I didnt need any tuts for making a house.Training is what you need.btw are you drunk? :D