chuchoide Posted December 19, 2010 Author Share Posted December 19, 2010 Well, today, I was bored… so I decided to see if I could make tiles, and I'm impressed I could actually make some Begginer ones, at my first try. I just want Feedback on them, and Suggestions in what else I should add into them.A map is attached to the post, to show them in action. Includes Grass, Trees, Walls, Floor and Little Tables.I ONLY WANT FEEDBACK AND CONSTRUCTIVE CRITISM. I don't want comments such as "Fail" or "Stupid" or something like that. I'm just posting for making my Pixeling Skills better. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jeff Posted December 19, 2010 Share Posted December 19, 2010 @Chuchoide:> Well, today, I was bored… so I decided to see if I could make tiles, and I'm impressed I could actually make some Begginer ones, at my first try. I just want Feedback on them, and Suggestions in what else I should add into them.> > A map is attached to the post, to show them in action. Includes Grass, Trees, Walls, Floor and Little Tables.> > I ONLY WANT FEEDBACK AND CONSTRUCTIVE CRITISM. I don't want comments such as "Fail" or "Stupid" or something like that. I'm just posting for making my Pixeling Skills better.tutorials. Read them. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
chuchoide Posted December 19, 2010 Author Share Posted December 19, 2010 Yeah, I will.Any feedback? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
luriok Posted December 19, 2010 Share Posted December 19, 2010 I agree with sandshrew about the tuts. You need to work on you basic line art, after try to give you art some depth add some shadding. I wish you luck with your skills Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Absolute Posted December 19, 2010 Share Posted December 19, 2010 @Sandshrew:> @Chuchoide:> > > Well, today, I was bored… so I decided to see if I could make tiles, and I'm impressed I could actually make some Begginer ones, at my first try. I just want Feedback on them, and Suggestions in what else I should add into them.> > > > A map is attached to the post, to show them in action. Includes Grass, Trees, Walls, Floor and Little Tables.> > > > I ONLY WANT FEEDBACK AND CONSTRUCTIVE CRITISM. I don't want comments such as "Fail" or "Stupid" or something like that. I'm just posting for making my Pixeling Skills better.> > tutorials. Read them.You don't need two signatures leading to your game thread. Its a waste of space.Its not bad for a first try. You should look up tutorials on shading and dithering. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Shinabi Posted December 19, 2010 Share Posted December 19, 2010 Kinda childish. No offence, but it looks like a girl who was bored in class drew that hastilyP.S. You use screenhunter!?!?! I do too! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
JSchilli1 Posted December 19, 2010 Share Posted December 19, 2010 Reminiscent of SNES RPGs. A good start.-JS1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
chuchoide Posted December 19, 2010 Author Share Posted December 19, 2010 @Shinabi:> Kinda childish. No offence, but it looks like a girl who was bored in class drew that hastily> > P.S. You use screenhunter!?!?! I do too!> I ONLY WANT FEEDBACK AND CONSTRUCTIVE CRITISM. I don't want comments such as "Fail" or "Stupid" or something like that. I'm just posting for making my Pixeling Skills better. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Shinabi Posted December 19, 2010 Share Posted December 19, 2010 That isn't constructive criticism? Hmm… Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Absolute Posted December 19, 2010 Share Posted December 19, 2010 @Shinabi:> That isn't constructive criticism? Hmm…If the definition of constructive criticism is putting people down, then yes. Unfortunately, constructive criticisms definition is nowhere close to that of what I mentioned. Let me break it down for you.con·struc·tive/kÉ™nˈstrÉ™ktiv/Adjective1\. Serving a useful purpose; tending to build up.crit·I·cism/krit-uh-siz-uhm/Noun3.the act or art of analyzing and evaluating or judging the quality of a literary or artistic work, musical performance, art exhibit, dramatic production, etc.Chuchoide, I believe this site should help you.[http://pixel.oceansdream.net/](http://pixel.oceansdream.net/) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bret Posted December 19, 2010 Share Posted December 19, 2010 inb4 CC debate begins :rolleyes:My biggest advice: Practice makes perfect. Never throw anything away, you can always redo what you started and make improvement. You generally always have an image in your head of what you are aiming for.. so keep trying to get it out of your head and onto the computer just like you imagined it.I tried out yours for fun!It's nothing spectacular… I just tried to fix up perspective, add some shading/dithering (minor), and add some texture. These three things can go along way to making better pixel art. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Fuu Posted December 19, 2010 Share Posted December 19, 2010 BRET'S IS BETTER. I CALL IT. <-<Lol. No seriously. You needs some moar practice. ~~The tables aren't even similar on the both sides~~? And the trees are just terrible. Perspective, my friend.Bricks don't look like that. And the grass should have DARKER outlines, not a completely different LIGHTER shade. and, it should look more like grass, instead of awkward bumps in the ground.Look at a tree, real quick. It has ROOTS. Your tree, however, has a base. and, no actual tree-like texture. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Murdoc Posted December 19, 2010 Share Posted December 19, 2010 @Bret:> inb4 CC debate begins :rolleyes:> > My biggest advice: Practice makes perfect. Never throw anything away, you can always redo what you started and make improvement. You generally always have an image in your head of what you are aiming for.. so keep trying to get it out of your head and onto the computer just like you imagined it.> > I tried out yours for fun!> > > > It's nothing spectacular… I just tried to fix up perspective, add some shading/dithering (minor), and add some texture. These three things can go along way to making better pixel art.Nice job dude.@Chuchoide .. No offense, but as everyone else here is saying, you need to take the time and do the basics first. Such as, highlights and shading for one. THat's my constructive criticism for you. :-P .. No doubt, its a nice start… But you can do way better. ;-) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
chuchoide Posted December 19, 2010 Author Share Posted December 19, 2010 Thanks everyone for the comments.I will try and work today on this tileset, and I'll then post it within a map, to see how its doing :)Thanks! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Fuu Posted December 19, 2010 Share Posted December 19, 2010 Another thing you've been doing. 32 x 32 trees? What? Not all of the tiles have to be 32x32\. You can extend them into a 32x64, or even higher. or wider, which ever one you want. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
chuchoide Posted December 19, 2010 Author Share Posted December 19, 2010 Thats exactly what I'm working on. I'm working on a 32x64 Tree. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lukin Posted December 19, 2010 Share Posted December 19, 2010 I like the bottom part of the tree so far. :) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
tmoney Posted December 19, 2010 Share Posted December 19, 2010 Looks great, the grass is beautiful the mountains are teh sexy the trees have green coins on them i love it!Just messin', but really its not too bad but needs improvement just like me. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
JSchilli1 Posted December 23, 2010 Share Posted December 23, 2010 SNES RPGs have 32x32 (or just square) tiles.-JS1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Murdoc Posted December 23, 2010 Share Posted December 23, 2010 @JS1:> SNES RPGs have 32x32 (or just square) tiles.> > -JS1There's many a snes rpg that doesn't contain exclusively 32x32 tiles. That's bull.-Murdoc Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
JSchilli1 Posted December 23, 2010 Share Posted December 23, 2010 Yeah, it is a style, though.-JS1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Murdoc Posted December 23, 2010 Share Posted December 23, 2010 @JS1:> Yeah, it is a style, though.> > -JS1You made it sound like all snes rpg's have 32x32 tiles for everything. Since, you didnt' say "some". ;-) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SawQuart Posted December 23, 2010 Share Posted December 23, 2010 If you want to be a lazy bum but keep your small tree, take out the stumps and make them bushes.:) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
JSchilli1 Posted December 23, 2010 Share Posted December 23, 2010 @Murdoc Sorry, yeah.-JS1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SawQuart Posted December 23, 2010 Share Posted December 23, 2010 SNES 32x32 ones look better in my opinion. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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