Jaiden Posted June 18, 2011 Author Share Posted June 18, 2011 Hey everyone,This is my first serious attempt at spiriting a sword. It's fairly simple and isn't the default size.I have thick skin, so I'd really love some critique. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bloodmorphed Posted June 18, 2011 Share Posted June 18, 2011 Well I'm not a Spriting expert as you can tell from my topic but I really like that sword.But the base seems a bit dull compared to the blade itself, if that makes sense. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
luriok Posted June 18, 2011 Share Posted June 18, 2011 Nice, just wanted to add tho. If I took a decent sword and hit the blade right between the two big section it would most likely break… lol anyway I really like it, nice shine and I think the handle is fine. If it were to be anymore less dull, it would shine like the blade, which is unnatural. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jeff Posted June 18, 2011 Share Posted June 18, 2011 it's very good. The only problem is why would a sword have a big gap between the top and bottom? It's just not very efficient. Nice colors and technique though. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
jocast Posted June 18, 2011 Share Posted June 18, 2011 I think it looks amazing, keep up the good work. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Duders Posted June 18, 2011 Share Posted June 18, 2011 Lol, everyone is concerned about the realism of the art.You are a good pixel artist and as they said, great colors and shine effects. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Cyprien Posted June 18, 2011 Share Posted June 18, 2011 I like it. It's not bad for more or less your first time doing pixel art. I wonder how the blade would look if it went all way down to the hilt. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Quess Posted June 19, 2011 Share Posted June 19, 2011 Yea, it's cool. But it isn't 32x32, is it? ;d Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jaiden Posted June 19, 2011 Author Share Posted June 19, 2011 Well, it isn't meant to be realistic! I want critique on the actual pixel art, not whether or not it would actually work.And I mentioned in the main post it wasn't 32x32 Quess, it's not suppose to be.Thanks for the positive comments though guys! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
azure Posted June 19, 2011 Share Posted June 19, 2011 @Jaiden:> Well, it isn't meant to be realistic! I want critique on the actual pixel art, not whether or not it would actually work.> And I mentioned in the main post it wasn't 32x32 Quess, it's not suppose to be.> > Thanks for the positive comments though guys!I don't really have any negative crit, but I feel that you could add more color… I'm not sure how to phrase it. The hilt seems so dull in comparison to the blade. It may just be me though. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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