Ice - Fire Posted June 20, 2011 Author Share Posted June 20, 2011 edit: fixed angle added more colorsHow did I do? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Drummerpete Posted June 20, 2011 Share Posted June 20, 2011 The angle is slightly off and I'm not sure about that shading. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ice - Fire Posted June 20, 2011 Author Share Posted June 20, 2011 @Peteyyy:> The angle is slightly off and I'm not sure about that shading.you sure its off, from what Iv read and found it shouldn't be Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Drummerpete Posted June 20, 2011 Share Posted June 20, 2011 Stop reading an _look at it._Edit: Though I suppose I should be more specific.Look at the angle of the horizontal panels. The angle of those is off. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ice - Fire Posted June 20, 2011 Author Share Posted June 20, 2011 I do 'Look At It.'I am less concerned with the angle and shading and more concerned with does it look good as a whole, does the top match the bottom, left match right, are the colors sharp, ect.I am still not sure about your angle argument but ill continue looking into it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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Ice - Fire Posted June 20, 2011 Author Share Posted June 20, 2011 the problem isn't within the angle then, all art iv looked at, and read about shows a 1 down or up 2 left or right pixel rule, you used a 1 pixel line. I also said I am not worried about angle, Either way I am keeping it the way it is. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Drummerpete Posted June 20, 2011 Share Posted June 20, 2011 Zoom in and look at the slope of the line I used… Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ice - Fire Posted June 20, 2011 Author Share Posted June 20, 2011 My pc's showing lines (edit of 1 pixel) ill have to look at it later, however pointing that out I think I know why it may be off if its off ill go check it myself, I think the fence is perfect for my purposes so lets just drop the angle issue and have conversations on the actual piece itself. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Drummerpete Posted June 20, 2011 Share Posted June 20, 2011 I give up with you. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ice - Fire Posted June 20, 2011 Author Share Posted June 20, 2011 @Peteyyy:> I give up with you.You give up… on telling me the angle is off... when I have said I'm not worried about it as of yetI understand its off and all but I'm not really worried about it being off, I'm asking for critique on the rest of the work so i can improve. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Drummerpete Posted June 20, 2011 Share Posted June 20, 2011 The angle is the most important part of the lineart. You've messed it up which is going to screw over everything else. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ice - Fire Posted June 20, 2011 Author Share Posted June 20, 2011 *sigh* i understand that and I wont make a mistake on it again, I know why it got messed up as well, and iv made a note to change it, if it makes you happy ill go fix it right away so this conversation can make some progress. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Drummerpete Posted June 20, 2011 Share Posted June 20, 2011 Well the next time someone gives you valid, constructive criticism, don't just say "I'm fine with it being wrong". Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ice - Fire Posted June 20, 2011 Author Share Posted June 20, 2011 People can have their reasons for it being a certain way, but thanks for the advise. Im having a bit of trouble making the fix do to a size issue but ill get it fixed.How should i go about making it 'mappable' in an application?, if each post has to be slightly bigger then the last. Which is why I had it the way I did. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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luriok Posted June 20, 2011 Share Posted June 20, 2011 Better angle but the shading still needs improvement Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ice - Fire Posted June 20, 2011 Author Share Posted June 20, 2011 How is this?I added a few more colors to the horizontal boards, is there anywhere else I should shade a bit more. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Drummerpete Posted June 20, 2011 Share Posted June 20, 2011 @Ice:> each post has to be slightly bigger then the last. Which is why I had it the way I did.Why would each post need to be bigger? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
IdoFreePixel Posted June 20, 2011 Share Posted June 20, 2011 @Peteyyy:> Why would each post need to be bigger?He probably wants it to look like its getting closer to you. :huh: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jaiden Posted June 20, 2011 Share Posted June 20, 2011 I love the shading, it's a unique style with a lot of depth. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
luriok Posted June 20, 2011 Share Posted June 20, 2011 The shading is better now Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ice - Fire Posted June 20, 2011 Author Share Posted June 20, 2011 I fixed the post size Issue, so overall did I do good for a first try? :3 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
luriok Posted June 20, 2011 Share Posted June 20, 2011 I think you did a pretty nice job Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ice - Fire Posted June 20, 2011 Author Share Posted June 20, 2011 Okay thanks I'll continue to post more of my attemps so I can get better, thanks for all the help. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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