vandie Posted December 12, 2012 Author Share Posted December 12, 2012 [media]https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=qYlw5YKnRHM[/media]note I did use a base for this Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
cheatking Posted December 12, 2012 Share Posted December 12, 2012 Image of the final product would be nice. I can't youtube. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
vandie Posted December 12, 2012 Author Share Posted December 12, 2012 uploaded one Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nook Posted December 12, 2012 Share Posted December 12, 2012 I love seeing videos of the process.The biggest issue is the hat. Adjusting the hat to match the top-down perspective of the sprite would help tremendously. ex:Saturated reds, pure greys, and poop browns? While those colors can be stylized, they are usually only used by amateurs. It's the equivalent of a painter restricting himself to the colors straight out of the tube, instead of mixing his own. I would suggest you use more natural tones.I noticed you did a little pillow shading. It'd a small canvas to detail on, yes, but try to avoid pillow shading. It looks too flat as it is.Those are my suggestions. What you have is not bad, but there's always room for improvement.  Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nook Posted December 12, 2012 Share Posted December 12, 2012 The biggest issue is the hat. Adjusting the hat to match the top-down perspective of the sprite would help tremendously. ex:Saturated reds, pure greys, and poop browns? While these kinds of colors can be stylized, they are usually only used by amateurs. It's kinda like a painter restricting himself to the colors straight out of the tube, instead of mixing his own. I would suggest you use more natural tones.I noticed you did a little pillow shading. It'd a small canvas to detail on, yes, but try to avoid pillow shading. It looks too flat as it is.Those are my suggestions. It's not bad, but there's always room for improvement.  Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
vandie Posted December 13, 2012 Author Share Posted December 13, 2012 thanks ill try that with the next one thanksAnyone got any ideas on what i should do next? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kusy Posted December 13, 2012 Share Posted December 13, 2012 Well… it doesn't look like a cyborg. It doesn't look like a gangsta. Those might be my main issues with it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
vandie Posted December 13, 2012 Author Share Posted December 13, 2012 well ok…errm thanks for being honest?... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Fuu Posted December 13, 2012 Share Posted December 13, 2012 Looks like a bald Brown Mafia dude, with a long ass floating blunt in front of him. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dark Crusade Posted December 16, 2012 Share Posted December 16, 2012 Looks more like a farmer or even just a civilian. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
vandie Posted December 16, 2012 Author Share Posted December 16, 2012 after the video i aded a robotic eye so this is outdated Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kusy Posted December 16, 2012 Share Posted December 16, 2012 You're making a tiny sprite. The fact that you imagined that this gray thing on his arm is a robotic part of an android has no correlation with me seeing it as such. When you do it in a HUGE zoom it even might look like what you wanted it to look… but when you look at it in the original size...It's a friggin Amish with his hand in a cast. Dirty one too. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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