lollicat Posted January 3, 2013 Author Share Posted January 3, 2013 I say house base because it's just the basic house without anything (windows, signs, chimneys, etc) added. Critique would be nice. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
hisherwin Posted January 3, 2013 Share Posted January 3, 2013 It's a Tent.. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
cheatking Posted January 3, 2013 Share Posted January 3, 2013 > It's a Tent..Tent's have wooden doors now?It's a hose whos roof is about to collapse. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Fogger Posted January 3, 2013 Share Posted January 3, 2013 > It's a Tent..Tents don't have bricked lined doors As for the house the lighting is inconsistent, especially around the roof area. The line separating the roof and the front wall draws too much attention with such a dark line (I removed it and it looks better already). Also try colors with less contrast in the back. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MadalinV Posted January 3, 2013 Share Posted January 3, 2013 > Tent's have wooden doors now?I was going to say that xD Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Agoraphobic Posted January 3, 2013 Share Posted January 3, 2013 As soon as I looked at it, it reminded me of an adobe house. Can't quite place it, but the roof looks a bit off, that being said I like it.Adobe house example.>!  Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
IceCream Tuesday Posted January 3, 2013 Share Posted January 3, 2013 roof is 100% off.This tiles? or just art practice? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
lollicat Posted January 3, 2013 Author Share Posted January 3, 2013 > roof is 100% off.> > This tiles? or just art practice?Tiles. I'm redoing everything from Ophiuchus.Yeah, I had the feeling the roof was off, I just wasn't sure how. I'll try to see if changing the shading will be any better. And yes it was basically based on an adobe house ahahaha. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
IceCream Tuesday Posted January 3, 2013 Share Posted January 3, 2013 Its not shading.. Its shape and perspective. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DMF Posted January 4, 2013 Share Posted January 4, 2013 just for hell of it. its a fancey tent! ok liike ok ish o-o kinda small and idk XD mind telling us whre the house be ? city? desert? mountains? dat impacts looks. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kusy Posted January 4, 2013 Share Posted January 4, 2013 ^> just for hell of it. its a fancey tent! ok liike ok ish o-o kinda small and idk XD mind telling us whre the house be ? city? desert? mountains? dat impacts looks. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jeff Posted January 5, 2013 Share Posted January 5, 2013 > Its not shading.. Its shape and perspective.While shape and perspective are way more noticable, the shading is also off. The darker ring on the roof makes no sense.It should not 'dissappear' into the distance, the top of the house should be a fairly even rectangle. I don't know why you have an indentation on either side of the house either. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
lollicat Posted January 5, 2013 Author Share Posted January 5, 2013 > While shape and perspective are way more noticable, the shading is also off. The darker ring on the roof makes no sense.> > It should not 'dissappear' into the distance, the top of the house should be a fairly even rectangle. I don't know why you have an indentation on either side of the house either.For some reason I thought I should have it 'disappear'??? but it's fixed now, its an even rectangle.the indentations are supposed to be like it being worn down or something i dont know lol Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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