Preview Of Something

[hisherwin]

I got bored on watching anime all the time so i did this


The Logo was created by MoktavZ

The background was created by =Naoko-Chaan

The window was created by me along with the characters

What do you think?

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[Daneta]

really cool

[abhi2011]

Looking good. But the window doesn't fit with the background and the logo.

[Swizl]

I agree with Abhi you have to change the window, it just doesn't work with your logo & background.

[Fogger]

If you are using photoshop save the jpg with best quality cause right now it looks really grainy.

[aaaron]

> save the jpg with best quality

>png

[abhi2011]

> >png

I think he meant about the GUI.

[aaaron]

I meant it as, use PNG.

[Wing]

> I meant it as, use PNG.

Fogger is assuming Sherwin uses eo which uses jpegs by default.

[Nook]

Completely lacks continuity.

[hisherwin]

> Fogger is assuming Sherwin uses eo which uses jpegs by default.

when you upload picture on facebook , it will auto jpg so it will get messy , filehost doesn't work 

and i will try to change the window

[moktavz]

Lookin Good **Sherwin**, But the GUI looks not Match with the Background. Maybe You should Edit your GUI using Photoshop I am sure by adding a little bit Effect your GUI will looks Good, Well Keep it Up the Good work !!! 

[abhi2011]

> Lookin Good **Sherwin**, But the GUI looks not Match with the Background. Maybe You should Edit your GUI using Photoshop I am sure by adding a little bit Effect your GUI will looks Good, Well Keep it Up the Good work !!! 

Actually those aren't GUI images. Those are VB6 controls I believe.

[moktavz]

Here i made a GUI for your game, Mybe this is will looks a little bit Better!

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[Daneta]

> Here i made a GUI for your game, Mybe this is will looks a little bit Better!

DAME how do you do it your so good like wow man

[Agoraphobic]

I like everything, except the yellow buttons. Something about them just doesn't look right to me. Anyway keep up the good work.

[Wortel Angels]

> DAME how do you do it your so good like wow man

Calm down he do so good works because he learned it ?

what i wonder are the gears selfmade or with an brush / Google

[hisherwin]

> Here i made a GUI for your game, Mybe this is will looks a little bit Better!

That's cool i wonder if you can make the menu gui for me 

[Kusy]

> Completely lacks continuity.

I hate when you guys are just so blunt. Come on, it's boring. You could have said that it has just as much continuity as Zelda franchise timeline. That would be entertaining.

Also save images as BMP. Best quality to size ratio.

[hisherwin]

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[Nook]

I don't do flattery, so please allow me to point out the stuff that bothers me the most.

The tree trunks are too short and fat like Kusy's chode.

The grass is **extremely** over saturated. It washes everything out and hurts to look at like Kusy. Use color palettes for your work; they help loads. Logically, something akin to the lightest value on your tree foliage would work as a grass color.

Honestly, I'd add a _little_ hue even to a stone gray rock (like blue darks and red lights). Without it, the rocks just suck the color out of everything.

Everything else has texture, so your building needs some too.

The leaves(?) tile you use a lot needs a little fine tuning. Trying to add detail to something so tiny makes them come out clunky and large. Make the leaves a lot smaller and rely on shape and color to identify them. Also… make several variations to spice things up a bit.

The boxy attack explosion is awkward. It should _at least_ be spherical. TBH, tiling the explosion graphic to take up space is tacky. I'd fix that if you can.

GUI still doesn't match the logo. And either way I'm not a fan of the GUI tbh. It's just gradients and boxes and an random fonts. The logo has nice metal and gears. Incorporate those into the design. A gear instead of a button, maybe? Machine-like structures instead of boxes? Get creative.