monowolf00 Posted July 24, 2008 Author Share Posted July 24, 2008 Well, I was attempting spriting and this is what I got. I know it doesnt have the side view stances. I couldnt do those and trust me, it looked like crap. Tell me if there good basic sprites. If you dont think they are please dont say anything like…."That's awful" or "This crap isnt worthy of even having a topic". Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Rayo Posted July 24, 2008 Share Posted July 24, 2008 Hmm. The hair on the back of his head shouldn't go into a point like it does. You need more varied colors in this head, along with darker lines around his head. Adding shadows would also make it look a little nicer.Not wonderful. But better than what I could do. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
monowolf00 Posted July 24, 2008 Author Share Posted July 24, 2008 Thanks for the tips. *Off Topic* Kreator or Elder will probably be here in due time to criticize,JK. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Klanz_online Posted July 24, 2008 Share Posted July 24, 2008 3/10lol Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
monowolf00 Posted July 24, 2008 Author Share Posted July 24, 2008 Oh crud i just realized that the top of the sprite blends with the forum layout to make his head look spiky. Its not really like that… Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Elder-Bunny Posted July 24, 2008 Share Posted July 24, 2008 @ht123:> Thanks for the tips. *Off Topic* Kreator or Elder will probably be here in due time to criticize,JK.How old are you, 12? Learn to grow up and listen to constructive criticism.Shade it, fix the goofy point in the hair, relax the shoulders and give his body more shape. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
monowolf00 Posted July 24, 2008 Author Share Posted July 24, 2008 Wow take it easy man, I was joking. I dint mean to offend anyone Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Drummerpete Posted July 24, 2008 Share Posted July 24, 2008 Looks a bit square. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bobbus Posted July 24, 2008 Share Posted July 24, 2008 Upload as PNG and ill rate it, JPG screws quality. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
monowolf00 Posted July 24, 2008 Author Share Posted July 24, 2008 Photobucket only uses jpeg. I wish it used PNG or bmp Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Klanz_online Posted July 24, 2008 Share Posted July 24, 2008 just needs some touch ups and it'll be good just keep practicing and u'll be good in notime man hope u the best ! :D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Drummerpete Posted July 24, 2008 Share Posted July 24, 2008 Photobucket allows PNG Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
monowolf00 Posted July 24, 2008 Author Share Posted July 24, 2008 How can you upload in png? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Drummerpete Posted July 24, 2008 Share Posted July 24, 2008 Save it as a PNG and upload.. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
monowolf00 Posted July 24, 2008 Author Share Posted July 24, 2008 oh okHere is the re-upload Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
shrig94 Posted July 24, 2008 Share Posted July 24, 2008 make the face more distinct, his stance is a bit too unnatural, overall it was a pretty good attempt. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
kender the great Posted July 25, 2008 Share Posted July 25, 2008 eww. looks way too much like RS. and that and it looks like there is no shading or anything done to it. shade it, detail the face. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Firon3 Posted July 25, 2008 Share Posted July 25, 2008 RS? Like Runescape? No way this looks like runescape…I personally thing the details are not so good, would need more work bu I do start my character with something looking somehow like this.... But the technique going along take years to do... but anyway, that's not the point.give more details, place a light point and shade it according to that, I'm sure you can do better Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
kender the great Posted July 25, 2008 Share Posted July 25, 2008 RS people look stiff with no faces. its what this reminds me of. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Drummerpete Posted July 25, 2008 Share Posted July 25, 2008 His legs are straight, looks unrealistic,Not bad though. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Robin Posted July 26, 2008 Share Posted July 26, 2008 Personally I dont walk without moving anything except the lower part of my leg. This is what happens when spriters are afraid to re-draw the sprite for different frames. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DrNova Posted July 26, 2008 Share Posted July 26, 2008 when in step frame, try giving the body a slight movement distinction. So it looks like he is walking, not robotting Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Robin Posted July 26, 2008 Share Posted July 26, 2008 I think it needs a lot more than that. The upper body swings a lot when walking. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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