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Drummerpete
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I made a simple banner, then changed the colour a few times.
Tell me X/10 and any improvements. Also, which colour's do you like the best?

EDIT:
New:
![](http://i217.photobucket.com/albums/cc271/Drummerpete/DreamScape.png)

OLD:
![](http://i217.photobucket.com/albums/cc271/Drummerpete/1.png)

![](http://i217.photobucket.com/albums/cc271/Drummerpete/2.png)

![](http://i217.photobucket.com/albums/cc271/Drummerpete/3.png)

![](http://i217.photobucket.com/albums/cc271/Drummerpete/4.png)

![](http://i217.photobucket.com/albums/cc271/Drummerpete/5.png)

![](http://i217.photobucket.com/albums/cc271/Drummerpete/6.png)

![](http://i217.photobucket.com/albums/cc271/Drummerpete/7.png)
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3/10.

TEXT: You need to make the text more readable, give it a stroke/shadow or glow, Change the font, its terrible. Doesn't mix with background.

BACKGROUND: The background also needs alot of work, I'm guessing you think it looks like stars? To me it looks like ink splodges… It's too grainy, and an eyesore.
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The border is too yellow.., it doesn't match the shade of yellow within the text, and have rounded inner edges, and square outer edges, Makes it look quite weird.

The background has been sorted out a little bit better, but the text still needs some work, especially the 'live your dream' slogan.

Rating: 5/10.
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