Bobbus Posted February 2, 2010 Author Share Posted February 2, 2010 Seriously, this thing is a disgrace and I've no idea what else to add. Someone please help.Before Edits:[![](http://img59.imageshack.us/img59/5680/cityy.png)](http://img59.imageshack.us/i/cityy.png/)Edit 1 (Thank you, Proximity):[![](http://img32.imageshack.us/img32/9241/city2x.png)](http://img32.imageshack.us/i/city2x.png/)Edit 2 (Thanks, Kreator):[![](http://img203.imageshack.us/img203/8809/city3.png)](http://img203.imageshack.us/i/city3.png/)Edit 3(Thanks, JNA and Kreator):[![](http://img62.imageshack.us/img62/403/city4.png)](http://img62.imageshack.us/i/city4.png/) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SawQuart Posted February 2, 2010 Share Posted February 2, 2010 Its really not that bad… I guess you could make the walls more dynamic (have indents), and you could add some NPCs to make it have movement... If you are refering to something more specific, please tell me... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bobbus Posted February 2, 2010 Author Share Posted February 2, 2010 I am planning on having the map with NPCs on that top wall, that should make that less bland.I'll also have NPCs thrown thoughout the whole map. But, in my stupid opinion, I wanna have the map look full and lush without the use of NPCs. I want it to look good WITHOUT NPCs, so when the NPCs are put in it looks SEXY.But, to answer your "specific" question, it just looks bland to me. I want more stuff to add in the bottom left section, specifically.Thanks a lot for your input :D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Aldur Posted February 2, 2010 Share Posted February 2, 2010 Hmm..What about adding some benches? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bobbus Posted February 2, 2010 Author Share Posted February 2, 2010 Brilliant idea, compadre.Edit 1 is up. Any other ideas? I feel like the upper right portion is now lacking. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Monkey Boy Posted February 2, 2010 Share Posted February 2, 2010 It would make more sense if the bench was faced the other way ;-d Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bobbus Posted February 2, 2010 Author Share Posted February 2, 2010 I had it set up so the citizens of Whateverthatcityiscalledsdale could look at the fountain, but I could set it up as bench facing both ways. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Aldur Posted February 2, 2010 Share Posted February 2, 2010 On the bottom left, the two tent roof things (not sure what they are called) remind me of a market place..So what about adding some boxes and barrels around them? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SawQuart Posted February 2, 2010 Share Posted February 2, 2010 Add more tile variation (different color walkways). Right now its all one basic color. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bobbus Posted February 2, 2010 Author Share Posted February 2, 2010 I don't really think walkways are the issue. I want all of them to be the same color. The city only has 1 major theme in terms of color, anyway. Thanks for the ideas, though :D I'll try and add that in in other places!I'll be sure to add some boxes to the tent-like-thingies, too. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dark Crusade Posted February 2, 2010 Share Posted February 2, 2010 It's all a bit too sparse. Make the houses bigger, throw in some crates and such, and fix the abnormally thin grass area. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bobbus Posted February 2, 2010 Author Share Posted February 2, 2010 Next edit up. I changed the grass part because it doesn't make any sense, then just threw in some other random boxes/barrels. Advice away please. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
jna Posted February 2, 2010 Share Posted February 2, 2010 The well and the vase in the middle of the map don't look good. Maybe add a bigger fountain or some benches there. Add some small stores there. Like the ones on the sides with striped roof. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bobbus Posted February 2, 2010 Author Share Posted February 2, 2010 I was thinking the same thing. New edit is up. Post opinions please. I've got a remote feeling of satisfaction with it, but could still use more help. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dark Crusade Posted February 3, 2010 Share Posted February 3, 2010 Too many random roads, they seem very impractical, but I see improvement. =) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bobbus Posted February 3, 2010 Author Share Posted February 3, 2010 Oh crap lol, if you don't like the roads, then you'll kill me for this:http://img685.yfrog.com/img685/2076/haleshiresofar1.png(Don't wanna post here, it's too big)That obviously is the incomplete version, but it does have the current design of it (in the top left corner).I mostly put it all together to see where I could fit buildings and stuff. What do you think of the overall size and pathway-plan that it has going? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ddunit Posted February 5, 2010 Share Posted February 5, 2010 @Bobbus:> Oh crap lol, if you don't like the roads, then you'll kill me for this:> > http://img685.yfrog.com/img685/2076/haleshiresofar1.png> > (Don't wanna post here, it's too big)> > That obviously is the incomplete version, but it does have the current design of it (in the top left corner).> > I mostly put it all together to see where I could fit buildings and stuff. What do you think of the overall size and pathway-plan that it has going?Not even a city, that's a god damn outpost. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bobbus Posted February 5, 2010 Author Share Posted February 5, 2010 @Ddunit:> @Bobbus:> > > Oh crap lol, if you don't like the roads, then you'll kill me for this:> > > > http://img685.yfrog.com/img685/2076/haleshiresofar1.png> > > > (Don't wanna post here, it's too big)> > > > That obviously is the incomplete version, but it does have the current design of it (in the top left corner).> > > > I mostly put it all together to see where I could fit buildings and stuff. What do you think of the overall size and pathway-plan that it has going?> > Not even a city, that's a god damn outpost.File name is "Haleshiresofar"AKA: I'm not done with it. That grass on the south is going to become a city, too. Just wanted something to put there so the screenshot didn't look like TOTAL fail. Only a little fail. :P Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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