Feedback Please.

[Shadowlexar]

Hello all Eclipse Lovers! :) hehe
I would like to have feedback on my maps.





[gaming ace]

I really love the tileset your using, and the Bridge map looks really great. However, try not to mix tilesets! In Fendor Gate when you mixed Inquisitors with your other tileset, it doesn't look terrible, but you definitely should use the same tileset as your other maps for everything. Lookin pretty good overall!

[Harris6310]

You really shouldn't mix tilesets.

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You beat me to it.

[Anna Comnena]

The bridge map is fine but you shouldn't have the same grass from the top cliffs in the gorge; leave it the darker green, and just add more foliage. The graveyard one isn't too bad except the cliffs get repetitive so you should have a few outcrops and perhaps vines (also maybe keep the graves a little bit away from the cliff edge, or given some erosion you'll wind up with remains sticking out the cliff and falling down).

The gate map is horrible, mainly because the wall isn't even mapped; it has no "top" – and you're mixing tilesets, which is very hard to do decently. Also your tiles are busted and a near-black color was picked as transparent/background so it made solid objects like the tower roof see-through.

The interior map is alright, a little empty though. For the other chambers make sure to add some differences, like L or T shaped rooms, and things like that.

Overall, not bad at all.
:)

[balliztik1]

There's not much I can add that others haven't said. You are mixing "zoomed" tiles with 1:1 ratio tiles, which means you've got defined tiles on top of blurry tiles. Either one would look fine, but together, it ruins the whole feel. It will be especially noticeable since you're using RMXP sprites, which are more defined.

[Robin]

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