Grizzy Posted May 2, 2011 Author Share Posted May 2, 2011 Title says it. After realizing the girl I was making looked horrible, I also realized i hated my gfx. So before I make any more items, weapons, or ect. I want to remake the sprite so it is more paperdoll friendly, and will look better when things are added on. The look I'm going for is just that of a paperdoll, if that makes since. Open and you can add a lot of customization when adding different items, ect ect. Anywho… tell me what you think of the general outline of the guy. Ignore the shading as it doesn't matter for jack atm.here is a before and after. the after being less shaded.< (shaded)  < (broader shoulders) male and female. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
XPiXel Posted May 2, 2011 Share Posted May 2, 2011 1st guy looks fine,just remove a few marks and it's gonna be fine. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Grizzy Posted May 2, 2011 Author Share Posted May 2, 2011 no the reason I'm switching is I don't like how little detail I can add with some of my items, plus I want my swords to not have to go so far out diagonal so it doesn't cross my guys face and force me to hide his face. So its gonna be redone. :P I added a shaded version as well. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jeff Posted May 2, 2011 Share Posted May 2, 2011 guy on the left is fat. guy on the right is ripped but has a huge head. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
XPiXel Posted May 2, 2011 Share Posted May 2, 2011 Oh,right! Just a suggestion,when you add the arms,don't make it too low,seeing your avatar made me think you're gonna do that for your paperdolls and other graphics. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Grizzy Posted May 2, 2011 Author Share Posted May 2, 2011 @Frosty:> guy on the left is fat. guy on the right is ripped but has a huge head.the 1st one is garbage. The second one tho… I was going for ripped and a big head. I think I want it to be customizable where they can pick between normal, ripped, and hairy. But does it look like a decent playable sprite, and not look to outta wack?I'm still new at this AB. What do u mean by too low lol? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
XPiXel Posted May 2, 2011 Share Posted May 2, 2011 Example –-> Head O ---> Body | --->Arms _|_ | | ----->Legs lol ^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Grizzy Posted May 2, 2011 Author Share Posted May 2, 2011 I'm slightly shocked by that drawing. I just lol'd when I saw it tho. :P I think I get what ur saying tho. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
XPiXel Posted May 2, 2011 Share Posted May 2, 2011 It's not a drawing lol,it's basically keys in the keyboard that will help me make an example only using symbols and no pictures :P Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sickey Posted May 2, 2011 Share Posted May 2, 2011 @Grizzy:> if that makes **since.**You said it again :cheesy: Anyways he stands kinda funny (the new one) I suggest you try to make him more like a "Normal" man no hulk :P Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Grizzy Posted May 2, 2011 Author Share Posted May 2, 2011 broader shoulders better?  Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
aaaron Posted May 2, 2011 Share Posted May 2, 2011 There we go. Looks better when a boy changes. xD Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Grizzy Posted May 3, 2011 Author Share Posted May 3, 2011 Here is what I think I might stick with. Opinion anyone? Other than the legs and broad sholders. :P Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sickey Posted May 3, 2011 Share Posted May 3, 2011 @Grizzy:> > > Here is what I think I might stick with. Opinion anyone? Other than the legs and broad sholders. :PYeah thats awesome :) But try to get the legs less "Splited" :P Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Anna Comnena Posted May 3, 2011 Share Posted May 3, 2011 They look fine but they are still too FLAT. The perspective should be a little bit more from above than they are. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MrKris Posted May 3, 2011 Share Posted May 3, 2011 @Grizzy:> > > Here is what I think I might stick with. Opinion anyone? Other than the legs and broad sholders. :PLooks good, but that dude is ripped! lol Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Chief Posted May 3, 2011 Share Posted May 3, 2011 Anatomy, you should study it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Anna Comnena Posted May 4, 2011 Share Posted May 4, 2011 Oh yeah about the muscles on the guy's torso, they aren't necessary for that scale in my opinion.Also,http://coelasquid.deviantart.com/art/Abdomination-How-to-draw-beef-132538271 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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