Kiddo456 Posted June 25, 2011 Author Share Posted June 25, 2011 This is my first Building I ever made…. i know that the color is bright (I Think) So......... Comment Here the mistakes i have or i need to improve so i can make more in the future thanks! :cheesy: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
dxxknight Posted June 26, 2011 Share Posted June 26, 2011 well i'll be the first :D i don't think it's to bad, better then what i personally could do atm. Anyway though i reccommend you work on adding a little more value it seems your whole building seems to plain being mostly one color. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kiddo456 Posted June 26, 2011 Author Share Posted June 26, 2011 oh ok thanks for the advice Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
erkro1 Posted June 26, 2011 Share Posted June 26, 2011 Its also a bit 'blocky', and your buildings isn't made of bricks :P Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lavos Posted June 26, 2011 Share Posted June 26, 2011 Not bad for a 2 point perspective building. Just add more detail, color palettes and shading. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Harris6310 Posted June 26, 2011 Share Posted June 26, 2011 Install Windows. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kiddo456 Posted June 26, 2011 Author Share Posted June 26, 2011 @Harris:> Install Windows.I already have windows. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lavos Posted June 26, 2011 Share Posted June 26, 2011 @Kiddo456:> I already have windows.lol what he meant is that you should add windows to your building. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Hanyou Posted June 28, 2011 Share Posted June 28, 2011 @Kiddo456:> I already have windows.You've been trolled trolololololol xDThat was so funny.Anyway, i were you i would consider changing the colours of that. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Posted June 30, 2011 Share Posted June 30, 2011 i would give the roof some other texture so it looks like a roof instead of a hollow box. otherwise good looking base. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
RaiKalGames Posted June 30, 2011 Share Posted June 30, 2011 Add some more shading and add some more detail to the door and maybe tone up the color of the roof a little.But its a good start :) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sauros Posted July 1, 2011 Share Posted July 1, 2011 First, you couldn't properly use this in Eclipse but its a nice start@Harris:> Install Windows.Also, if your going to give him advice, be more descriptive other than 'Install windows' Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Posted July 1, 2011 Share Posted July 1, 2011 Look's good to be your first to be honest :) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Scribbyz Posted July 1, 2011 Share Posted July 1, 2011 Perspective and structure are nice. I would add a light source? Put more effort, and draw out the bricks. Nice for a first go at it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SawQuart Posted July 1, 2011 Share Posted July 1, 2011 The sign's color could be considered an off-white, so I think if you made the red "rustic" by adding in some brown, it may look a bit better.Just work on pallets for now, you're line art is acceptable (although I do think you should add windows). Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MrKris Posted July 1, 2011 Share Posted July 1, 2011 There is no texture, and hardly any shading. Pretty boring unless you like one color cubes with a sign on it. The door is horribly colored to match that red, and dos not really look like a door, more of a square crap colored thing on the front of your building. It looks like you made it in MSPain in less then 10 minutes. You can improve a lot on this.How to improve:1\. Add texture to the walls2\. Add some shading other then the roof3\. Change shade of red to something darker4\. Redo the whole door and use some effort this time5\. Change the color of the door after step 46\. Add something on the signIf you follow these steps correctly the building might turn out good, depends on how much effort you put in to it. It should take some time to make a good piece of art.Regards,Smore Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Rotflturion Posted August 26, 2011 Share Posted August 26, 2011 Change the shade on the roof to LIGHTER than the rest [it is closer to the sun], else at first sight it looks like an open box :) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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