mhedoos Posted January 31, 2012 Author Share Posted January 31, 2012 Hello Guys !Long time since i have posted in these forums,today i'm showing you guys my first made sprites. And I appreciate any kind of criticism that is going to help me ofc.Thanks ! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SawQuart Posted January 31, 2012 Share Posted January 31, 2012 That's pretty good for a first try. They lack a few things though, namely detail. Shading seems like you pillow-shaded it and didn't develop a light source. The guy with the black hair has a flat top of his head which should also be fixed (make it more messy). Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
mhedoos Posted January 31, 2012 Author Share Posted January 31, 2012 How about this one ? i only changed the hair to a more messy one ? idk lol Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jeff Posted January 31, 2012 Share Posted January 31, 2012 Give him some hands. Then do a bit of shading, not just detail. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
mhedoos Posted January 31, 2012 Author Share Posted January 31, 2012 for the hands idk if i'm gonna give him real detailed hands i think i'm just gonna go with these for a while :Pand for the shading idk how i can i make it good looking :s any good tutorials or edit would be awesome.Anyways thanks for the help :D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jumbofile Posted January 31, 2012 Share Posted January 31, 2012 I edited a littleI made his pose more "natural" While keeping the cartoon theme. I also fixed the shading.Its good for your first try. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jeff Posted January 31, 2012 Share Posted January 31, 2012 For hands just give him a little bulb at the end of his arms. Arms are too short, too. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
mhedoos Posted January 31, 2012 Author Share Posted January 31, 2012 Thanks Greg and Eckhart.I'l try and make other sprites ASAP and i will upload them here. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
mhedoos Posted January 31, 2012 Author Share Posted January 31, 2012 Does this look like some kind of futuristic suit like the ones on Star Trek ?.jpg) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
guzmanm Posted February 1, 2012 Share Posted February 1, 2012 The colors are okay, but I dislike the shading. And no, it looks like a pajama. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
mhedoos Posted February 1, 2012 Author Share Posted February 1, 2012 yeah lol i knew it wasn't looking right xD Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Purey Posted February 1, 2012 Share Posted February 1, 2012 Here's a quick edit.1ST: Use more contrasted colors.2ND:Change the pajama-thingy's shading. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Wyz Posted February 1, 2012 Share Posted February 1, 2012 Purey, You really need to do Hue Shifting. I posted the same remark in your thread. Your version of the suit looks like rubber. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Fuu Posted February 2, 2012 Share Posted February 2, 2012 @Purey:> Here's a quick edit.> 1ST: Use more contrasted colors.> 2ND:Change the pajama-thingy's shading.> Everything you make has bad shading and looks like rubber. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Purey Posted February 2, 2012 Share Posted February 2, 2012 @[ThePirate:> Fuu link=topic=77932.msg835907#msg835907 date=1328194370]> Everything you make has bad shading and looks like rubber.At least, I'm trying to help, make better if you don't like…@Wyz:> Purey, You really need to do Hue Shifting. I posted the same remark in your thread. Your version of the suit looks like rubber.Ill try to improve that, thanks for a tip.PS:About the rubber thing, i thought it was a rubber, when i took a look at this yesterday :o. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
mhedoos Posted February 2, 2012 Author Share Posted February 2, 2012 Thanks Purey for the edit :DBut i'm trying to keep a cartoonish look :D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
mhedoos Posted February 14, 2012 Author Share Posted February 14, 2012 Sorry for double posting but here is my new creation :) : Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Wyz Posted February 14, 2012 Share Posted February 14, 2012 Hue Shifting, mother ducker! Do you use it?no Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
mhedoos Posted February 14, 2012 Author Share Posted February 14, 2012 I just read a tut about that as i had no idea about hue shifting XD Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Wyz Posted February 14, 2012 Share Posted February 14, 2012 Well please use it. It makes things infinitely better. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
aaaron Posted February 14, 2012 Share Posted February 14, 2012 They're alright for your first ones.Hue-Shifting will make them better;D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
_Her0 Posted February 14, 2012 Share Posted February 14, 2012 Of course, I will agree with everyone else, hue-shifting. At least your trying and getting somewhere with these, practice and time will make you better, just keep trying and take people's advice. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
mhedoos Posted February 17, 2012 Author Share Posted February 17, 2012 What about this one ? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
_Her0 Posted February 17, 2012 Share Posted February 17, 2012 Getting better, i think the legs need to be a little bigger. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
mhedoos Posted February 17, 2012 Author Share Posted February 17, 2012 Thanks :D and i will try Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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