Zexion

Thank you for reading. I understand where you are coming from, but don't worry I will add some more engaging plot stuffs when it comes down to it in the game. As I said, this was done in a night on wordpad and it's only ment to be the base of the story. There will be tons of details once it's completed!

Thanks for the feedback! I made this in a random text file just off the top of my head. I know that sounds…bad, but I had been thinking about it for a while. Needless to say, I didn't exactly run a spell check on it or clean it up at all. I will make sure to do that on the project thread though :)

Haha, all are welcome. I only decided against posting it here, because I figured using pm would weed-out the ones that would don't actually care about the story.

Hope to hear back from someone soon :P

Just sent it to you. I hope it's not too confusing. I might have said the name "Bit" in some places and "Bane" in others. They are the same person. I recently renamed him and now I suffer from traumatic name change disorder.

PM'ed ^^

I'm looking for several opinions on a story I wrote for my game. If you are willing to read through a pretty lengthy wall of text, please pm me! The story is for a kingdom hearts related game I am making. Has been in production as of January aimed for release in December, but the date is subject to change if needed. Like I said, PM, or even post if you are interested. Also, feel free to leave your review here instead of pm. It's all up to you :P

Imo, it looks good. The only thing that gets me is the way that the animation plays. It zooms out way to slowly, I keep expecting it to finish, and then when it does, it's just not as satisfying (lol) as I wanted it to be. I would make the zoom out slightly faster, (or just end it sooner because the font does become a bit too tiny), and on top of that, add a screen flash of white when the logo is done. (As to imply that the letters have 'hit' the gear) I think that would make it look better.

I actually like the roof better on the bigger house. Nicely done. Small, yet still big enough to see detail.

It's nicely done, but like I've said before, too tiny. I personally have a problem with tiny sprites because I can't see the details (which make the sprite look nice). Nothing against your art though!

I like your work so far, but I just think that it has no depth. Your shades are all relatively close together making your pixels appear flat and washed out. The tree trunk is nicely done, but colors could still be experimented with (though that is the least of the problems), and the leaves just look like they were flipped several times. They have an obvious pattern in the middle. I hope this helps you improve them :)

I understand, and I won't bother with them lol. It's just so funny some of the things they say, "Scrolling credits: We don't know why EO has not added this. Maybe some day they will take the 30 seconds it takes to add this". Really? Who even needs that, lol!

I'd play a game with these gfx, anything is better than overused RTP. That said, I don't think I'd play an ORPG game with these graphics…

Wow lol, look at this: [http://www.devogeninteractive.com/g2dcomparison.htm](http://www.devogeninteractive.com/g2dcomparison.htm) They are such try hards. Seriously, like if they would ever have used VB6 to make an ORPG engine if eclipse hadn't done so first. Haha, and you can tell they try really hard to show up eclipse. Kinda sad to be honest. It's one thing to try to make a better software based on previous editions, but it's really something else to try to put down the original.

@Sky Yeah, that's why I hope I'm done before it, but if not I can still turn it into something with the same engine. (And let my sprites go to waste T.T) @Growlith Thanks! I'm still missing Sora and Riku though, obv. Lol. I'm also thinking about changing the KH font to the original style because: 1\. That font was one that I failed horribly at making last year. 2\. That font also doesn't fit in when there are no words placed over it. 3\. Worst outlineing ever.

Thanks guys :D @mytsaw : Lol! Well I can only do so much for the girl :b Edit: It's actually part of a fan game I've been working on for… EVER. KHIII. The title is a little pretentious, but it's meant to be a fun game not a serious continuation. I wonder if I will finish before the real KHIII is out :S Some screenies of my project WIP: >!  >! 

 I am proud because I've never done something this nice before :s

Here's what I got: Plain: >!  Cool Bg: >! 

I can try, but I don't know what that picture is o.o Is it a comet flying by a planet? Is it the robot from toonami? A bit more explanation plx

Waaaaaaaait a second. ::botsta:: Did you use the runescape chat box as a background texture? Lol. Sorry, it just sticks out to me :b

For me, this style is just a little generic.

I totally understand, but you might want to edit it anyway. No sense in being lazy, haha. I like that you decided to leave the eyes up to the player because it gives more variance to characters. Nice job. Have you done the other directions aswell?

Lol, I can totally see where you took out the eyes XD. It looks much better, though.

I like it! Though I am growing a bit tired of all the tiny sprites :s people have 1600x900 size screens and higher now aday's. Idk, it's just my opinion, I'd rather use bigger sprites :b

Honestly, I think it's mainly the fact that it has ears. The eyes aren't great, but the ears kinda kill it all. The body shape is fine :s looks chibi-ish.