L0lz Posted August 29, 2008 Author Share Posted August 29, 2008 I've been working on my own science on the lore of Galaxy Crisis, and having these two facts opens possibilities for a lot of new stuff.> Elements- Elements come in three forms. Matter, Energy, and Crystals. Matter wise, the Elements would show as roaring fires, and calm seas. Energy wise, humans would call upon this energy and use it to cut paths, destroy land, and heal the wounded. Crystal wise, these elements would be trapped in crystals, and when forged would enhance or create new objects.> > Cosmic Atom- The main scientific study in which Atoms on Athena or in it, act as spirits that can be manipulated into forms of energy, layers of atmosphere, any element, etc. These Atoms aren't your ordinary atom, they are much larger than regular cells, and have no Positive or negative electrons.What do ya think?There's more lore at the forums, and more to be written.http://s4.invisionfree.com/Galaxy_Crisis/ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
lucifer1101 Posted August 30, 2008 Share Posted August 30, 2008 that is interesting. although some of the words you chose to describe things just dont seem right.like "matter wise" Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
L0lz Posted August 30, 2008 Author Share Posted August 30, 2008 XD, I don't have a high vocabulary tyvm. :3 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Particle Posted August 30, 2008 Share Posted August 30, 2008 I like how you've put a new spin on things, I just don't like how you've phrased any of it. You have a different style or writing which is fine but you tend to jump around a lot so things become out of order. It causes the reader to become confused and not know what is happening (I'm referring to all of your pieces of writing: Storyline, Elements and Atoms and Daemons) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
L0lz Posted August 31, 2008 Author Share Posted August 31, 2008 It wasn't thoroughly planned out piece by piece, I merley typed what came to mind. XD Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Khachaturian Posted August 31, 2008 Share Posted August 31, 2008 A good start nonetheless Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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