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Elements an Atoms.


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I've been working on my own science on the lore of Galaxy Crisis, and having these two facts opens possibilities for a lot of new stuff.

> Elements- Elements come in three forms. Matter, Energy, and Crystals. Matter wise, the Elements would show as roaring fires, and calm seas. Energy wise, humans would call upon this energy and use it to cut paths, destroy land, and heal the wounded. Crystal wise, these elements would be trapped in crystals, and when forged would enhance or create new objects.
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> Cosmic Atom- The main scientific study in which Atoms on Athena or in it, act as spirits that can be manipulated into forms of energy, layers of atmosphere, any element, etc. These Atoms aren't your ordinary atom, they are much larger than regular cells, and have no Positive or negative electrons.

What do ya think?

There's more lore at the forums, and more to be written.

http://s4.invisionfree.com/Galaxy_Crisis/
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I like how you've put a new spin on things,  I just don't like how you've phrased any of it.  You have a different style or writing which is fine but you tend to jump around a lot so things become out of order.  It causes the reader to become confused and not know what is happening (I'm referring to all of your pieces of writing: Storyline, Elements and Atoms and Daemons)
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