Grass tiles

[Hippoman789]

now its jsut this:

tips? rate?

edit: forgot to mention…this is  my first time.

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how is it?

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[zade_o]

the bottom doesn't tile very well because of those 2 light patches right beside each other, and then the one on the right side makes it look like 3 right beside each other, so you can clearly see where 1 row ends and another starts.

it's good that you actually gave it texture instead of just noise but i would probably put more of that little shrub in it and I would probably do 3 different shades. Idk, grass is always really hard.

[Hippoman789]

i see what your saying.

well..not really.

ill try 3 shades but im going to be now…so ill have to do it later. although i get what your saying about the light green thing.

now i  need ot know, for the 3rd shade, light or dark?

[Hippoman789]

bump. i updated it.

rate and give tips please.

[Anna Comnena]

I think it looks good. The minimal shape design for the grass is a neat effect. It gives an abstract type of texture which doesn't literally display grass, but somehow promotes the same feeling.

[Hippoman789]

thanks anna, ill try to finish the rest tomorrow and try it out too.

[makairu]

Interesting, I like the style… 9/10, things can always use improvement...

[Hippoman789]

indeed. well thanks for rating!
ill get more finished tonight.

[cheatking]

8/10 The lighter and darker patches look like bats. :P

[Hippoman789]

Oh i forgot to mention. that line in the middle will be either removed or shaded better.

[Chief]

hmm… grass texture is a start, but could be a lot better... the cliffs are alright, but on the sides, they are usually barely seen... not as wide as the downaward cliffs... so, should be a smiple fix, and the grass should look more "grass" like... add smaller baldes,a nd more of them, instead of larger less blade textrue kidna thing... lol

[Hippoman789]

its not cliffs. its dirt.

[Chief]

oh… lol, whoops... that case, looks alright, but the transition should eiterh be gradual, or jsut cut off... not in between...a lso, poor color choice for the dirt... should be mroe brownish...

[Hippoman789]

if you look closer you can see the shading but yeh i told you i need to fix dat line.

[Hippoman789]

edit. updated it.