Godlord Posted March 20, 2009 Share Posted March 20, 2009 Once in a monthher alter ego appears.A few days beyondthey're gone, the tears.I don't know,my inspiration is lost somehow.Or my lack of English rhyming,and perhaps the right timingbecome the acknowledged annoyanceof this poetry romance.Regards, Xenonyte. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Irhymer Posted March 20, 2009 Share Posted March 20, 2009 Pretty good ;) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Irhymer Posted March 20, 2009 Share Posted March 20, 2009 ~~~Fair Well T.E~~~-By Irhymer-Poor T.EYou didn't have a chanceIf 3.0 was the D.SYou would be the game boy advancedWe didn't know if you were a guy or girlNinja - Tech said "I didn't dare too look"Once again. T.E you didn't stand a chanceWith all these game makers, gone free lanceBut wait, theirs hopeYorty got a linknot long until it's broketheir only for a wink… ;)Story - This is about the death of Total Eclipse. With some actual discussions mentioned in the forum. It suck but i thought it was necessary... for T.E :cry:. lol Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
LRgamer Posted March 20, 2009 Share Posted March 20, 2009 @[SF:> Irhymer link=topic=40811.msg402736#msg402736 date=1237586058]> *claps* that deserves a few hundred claps.> Man that could be a rap> Man i'm a poet> I didn't even know it.> That was a crime> of rime> that was lame> im ashamed..> lol jk i can do much better than this.> > But nice poem Vergilius :cheesy:Thank you for your praiseSorry to see that you have to part waysWith your friends all the timeBut you shouldn't be down and you should rhymeExpress your feelings, my poetAnd before you know itthe melancholy will stop with cutting your heartMy identity is a mystery for youBut there's a person in this thread , who knewwho I was, and also who I am right now.Fiercefully I fight for the freedom of your memories,because we are who we are, those feloniesor mysteries, are simply your identity. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Godlord Posted March 20, 2009 Share Posted March 20, 2009 Hidden identities.Will not reveal who you're.Who you will be.Who you have been.Hidden identities.Are fooling the world.Will be fooling the world.Have been fooling the world.Even when somebody knows your identity.He will not know who you are.He will only know you slightly.An identity will not reveal if you have been smoking a cigar.Nor will an identity tell anyonewhat you feel.If your soul is goneand that you will never heal.Regards, Xenonyte. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
LRgamer Posted March 20, 2009 Share Posted March 20, 2009 @Xenonyte:> Hidden identities.> Will not reveal who you're.> Who you will be.> Who you have been.> > Hidden identities.> Are fooling the world.> Will be fooling the world.> Have been fooling the world.> > Even when somebody knows your identity.> He will not know who you are.> He will only know you slightly.> An identity will not reveal if you have been smoking a cigar.> > Nor will an identity tell anyone> what you feel.> If your soul is gone> and that you will never heal.> > Regards,> Xenonyte.That requires a lost soulThat has to be my first goal:Stop people from losing itI can feel it in my gitI'm born for this Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Irhymer Posted March 20, 2009 Share Posted March 20, 2009 omg. Xenonyte and Vergilius need to be rappers. 10 out of 10 for both of you… Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
LRgamer Posted March 20, 2009 Share Posted March 20, 2009 We had to do it for our homework todayLearn a poem by heart and sayit in front of the classand I got the maximum of pointsI moved my jointsThat prolly got me the maxSo now I can relaxand that poem was aimed at you, IrhymerShall I compare a poem to a summer's day? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Irhymer Posted March 20, 2009 Share Posted March 20, 2009 dang how long did that take…. 1 min. Dang your'e good XD Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Godlord Posted March 20, 2009 Share Posted March 20, 2009 I'm your stimulator.I'm your drug.I'm your hyper ventilator.I'm your butt plug.Don't ask me why.I'm mentally diseased, can't deny.At least the last rules aren't expectable.So the poem is making itself worthable.Maybe I abuse poetic freedom.I think I need some jus de pomme.Regards, Xenonyte. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
LRgamer Posted March 20, 2009 Share Posted March 20, 2009 It's not about thinking at allI'll let you relax , go to the mallThen read my poems againThe only rap I consider learningIs one about card games: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Wic65gt1RkQ&fmt=18 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Godlord Posted March 20, 2009 Share Posted March 20, 2009 Writing poems is liking stories.There should be a plot but no worries.You don't have to focus on grammar or spelling.Just do your thing.Regards, Xenonyte. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
makairu Posted March 21, 2009 Author Share Posted March 21, 2009 GAHHHH XD XD XDI'm about to end up rhyming everything I say just from looking at the poems… most of them are nicely done, they have flow and scheme :azn: As for me, I'm not a very good poet :icon_crap: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Godlord Posted March 21, 2009 Share Posted March 21, 2009 @makairu:> GAHHHH XD XD XD> > I'm about to end up rhyming everything I say just from looking at the poems… most of them are nicely done, they have flow and scheme :azn: As for me, I'm not a very good poet :icon_crap:You will learn, my son.Just try and let your fear begone.It's as easy as pie.You just have to try.Regards, Xenonyte. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
makairu Posted March 21, 2009 Author Share Posted March 21, 2009 Xenonyte told me to try it,Some how, I'm not buying it…Umm, I didn't realize it, but I rhymed it and itNow I'm just like a rapper! XD Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Godlord Posted March 21, 2009 Share Posted March 21, 2009 Just try to enlarge your vocabulary.Which can be done by choosing word so elementary.Not every rule has to rhyme though.Sometimes, people will just have to use another rhyme scheme.Regards, Xenonyte. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Hippoman789 Posted March 21, 2009 Share Posted March 21, 2009 I hate poetry.So stupidtyI make up wordsi must be doctor suess Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Godlord Posted March 21, 2009 Share Posted March 21, 2009 @Hippoman:> I hate poetry.> So stupidty> I make up words> i must be doctor suessI hate simple poetry.Shows no morality.Roses are red.Violets are blue.You must be death. (Remember this poem is not towards anyone)That's my love for you.Regards, Xenonyte. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Hippoman789 Posted March 21, 2009 Share Posted March 21, 2009 thats so funny.ZOMG A BUNNYim just rymhingnot really caring. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
makairu Posted March 21, 2009 Author Share Posted March 21, 2009 @Hippoman:> I hate poetry.> So stupidty> I make up words> i must be doctor suessXDVocabulary and catch phrases aren't always my thing,As for my rhyme schemes, they don't always singMany times I see my poetry is failOn days like this when my mind is frail Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Irhymer Posted March 21, 2009 Share Posted March 21, 2009 @makairu:> XD> Vocabulary and catch phrases aren't always my thing,> As for my rhyme schemes, they don't always sing> Many times I see my poetry is fail> On days like this when my mind is frailMaybe you should try the rhyming gamejust sit right here I'll tell you how to playYou wait for that moment of inspirationthen yo start your new rhyming sensation.I think you got schooledbut not by meWere all being ruledby verg, and xeno the homi G's.lol… :P Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Hippoman789 Posted March 21, 2009 Share Posted March 21, 2009 poetry sucks.thats my poem. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Godlord Posted March 21, 2009 Share Posted March 21, 2009 I'm saving all Virgo's and Xenon's poems into a big collection.It will become our new attraction.The poetic bro's.Lets see how it goes.Regards, Xenonyte. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
makairu Posted March 21, 2009 Author Share Posted March 21, 2009 That sounds rather interesting,Though it would be mind molestingMaybe you should get to the pointOf how you'll do this project that's joint Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Hippoman789 Posted March 21, 2009 Share Posted March 21, 2009 that was horribleworse then minejapense are lazythey cant even ryhme Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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