makairu Posted March 19, 2009 Author Share Posted March 19, 2009 If anyone has any poetry or lyrics you've written, post it here! Something I wrote last night:Forevermore roll the waves,Lost within a nightly haze.Upon the shores I would stand,Feet firmly planted upon the sand.This is what gives the breeze,Underneath the shadowed trees,The gift given through the ages,Into the very soul it gazes.So it's spotted here and there,Around the people who truly care,What was precious, given to us,Should not be taken without just.If I am gone, what would matter?No effect on society's latter.Something precious I did save,But I also took the blade.Forever more roll the waves,Lost within a nightly haze.Upon the shores I would stand,If only someone could understand.-(C) Michael Zickefoose 2009 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Hippoman789 Posted March 19, 2009 Share Posted March 19, 2009 I once was a duckI was hit by a truckon a green sidewalkin a tangerine sky.i seriously have a million of dem poems. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Thorn Posted March 19, 2009 Share Posted March 19, 2009 This isn’t a poem, it’s a venomous slantAgainst people who try things,Though they know that they can’t.Then people like me have to clean up their messWho they think that they are is anyone’s guessNow I’m not knocking courage, or drunken ambitionThe promotion of forethought is my preordained missionIf you know you can’t do something, please let it restFor guaranteed failure is failure at bestThis may seem like a rant, a chewing-out evenBut it’s just a reminder of pure, basic reason. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Irhymer Posted March 20, 2009 Share Posted March 20, 2009 Before this topic dies:Demi's song "dont forget" has inspired me to right poetry about (this is sad.. lol) about the girl i fell in love with, then moved, and now i cant remember her.Don't forget - [http://www.touchofdeathforums.com/smf/index.php?topic=40838.msg401990;topicseen#new](http://www.touchofdeathforums.com/smf/index.php?topic=40838.msg401990;topicseen#new)–-------------------------------------------------------Can't remember your faceCan't remember your nameAll i see is your shadowy graceI'm stuck in your broken picture frameto be continued..... ;) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
makairu Posted March 20, 2009 Author Share Posted March 20, 2009 interesting Irhymer.. and Thron.. was that directed towards me? :embarrassed: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Thorn Posted March 20, 2009 Share Posted March 20, 2009 Not at all, I've had that one around for a while. Actually got that one published, won the local newspaper's poetry contest. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Godlord Posted March 20, 2009 Share Posted March 20, 2009 Ha, too bad that I only write poems in Dutch.> Opus Magnum Immortalis> > Ooit begon de tijd te tikken.> Plots begon de ruimte te bloeien.> Uiterst snel spuwde de knal planeten uit zonder te mikken.> Slechts enkele seconden gingen verloren aan het groeien.> > Maar wij mensen, zijn slechts een deel.> Alleszins vergaan wij aan de tijd.> Gezien door onze ogen zijn wij niet veel.> Nu de tijd aan ons snijdt.> Uitkijkend naar hoe de tijd verder tikt.> Maar ook hoe hij ons in de zielen prikt.> > Is dit alles waar wij moeten om geven?> Moge we dan nog eeuwen beven.> Moordend is de tijd.> Ook waar ik aan lijd.> Reëel zouden we moeten wezen.> Tijd zal ons niet genezen.> Als de onsterfelijkheid niet te bereiken valt.> Lach dan samen met uw naasten.> In de hoop dat de tijd het leven minder vergalt.> Slechts dan, hoeven wij ons niet te haasten.Should be Opus Magnum Immortale, but then I would have only 19 rules instead of 20\. The non-poetry fixed translation from Google translate:> Once started the time ticking.> Suddenly the space began to flourish.> Very quickly spit the bright (alternative: explosion) planets without focusing.> Only a few seconds were lost to grow.> > But we humans are only a (small) part.> We lost every time.> Seen by our eyes, we are not much.> Now the time us cuts.> Looking at how the time is ticking.> But how he stands in our souls punctured.> > Is this all we have to give a care about?> May we then still be shaking for centuries.> Murderous is time.> Even where I suffer from.> Realistic we should be.> Time will not heal.> If immortality is not achieved.> Laugh together with your loved ones.> In the hope that the time life less blights.> Only then do we not have to hurry.Regards. Xenonyte. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Irhymer Posted March 20, 2009 Share Posted March 20, 2009 @makairu:> interesting Irhymer..Thanks… i think... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
makairu Posted March 20, 2009 Author Share Posted March 20, 2009 It was in a complimentary manor, it was short and to the point, while most poems are long-ish and usually take things in a metaphoric way. :embarrassed: Xenonyte, that was very nice… I liked it :cheesy:Thorn, that poem seems like it could be turned into lyrics, they have a sort of musical scheme... I dunno why Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Irhymer Posted March 20, 2009 Share Posted March 20, 2009 oh, ok thanks man. :cheesy: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Godlord Posted March 20, 2009 Share Posted March 20, 2009 > Xenonyte, that was very nice… I liked itHaha, thanks.Regards, Xenonyte. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
LRgamer Posted March 20, 2009 Share Posted March 20, 2009 Hello , you all know me very wellI have a poem so swellThat your hearts will overflow of warmth and loveAnd you'll think of your lover"Compare her to one of the stars above":that you won't discoverbut read my poem neverthelessNever be afraid to ask for more, be dauntless!I drown in your blue eyesYou never liked me otherwise…That's how it appeared to be according to meI took my chance, in a glance,without a lot of romanceNow we're together, happier than hewho sees hate on his face,hating his beloved out of confusionliving without love nor grace,I was once him, what a conclusion! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Irhymer Posted March 20, 2009 Share Posted March 20, 2009 *claps* that deserves a few hundred claps.Man that could be a rapMan i'm a poetI didn't even know it.That was a crimeof rimethat was lameim ashamed..lol jk i can do much better than this.But nice poem Vergilius :cheesy: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Hippoman789 Posted March 20, 2009 Share Posted March 20, 2009 its ryhme Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Irhymer Posted March 20, 2009 Share Posted March 20, 2009 i know. I did that on purpose. My name is irhymer (dah i can spell rhyme) Its my last name to.James Rhymer (lol) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
makairu Posted March 20, 2009 Author Share Posted March 20, 2009 ha I didn't even notice that Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Irhymer Posted March 20, 2009 Share Posted March 20, 2009 @makairu:> ha I didn't even notice thatlol. do you mean my name? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
makairu Posted March 20, 2009 Author Share Posted March 20, 2009 no, the fact you spelled rhyme wrong :P Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Irhymer Posted March 20, 2009 Share Posted March 20, 2009 oh lol. Yah i did that to go along with the fact that the poem was a joke. Plus my name last name is Rhymer, so i should be able to spell it … lol ;) ( i love these smilies) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Irhymer Posted March 20, 2009 Share Posted March 20, 2009 OK I wrote three more simple poems all through out out school today…Sorry I'm about to quadruple post (maybe).. bu i want them separate.. ;) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Irhymer Posted March 20, 2009 Share Posted March 20, 2009 ~~~Open/Close~~~-By Irhymer-–-----------------One door closesAnother one opensA new story blooms, just like red rosesI could never say "I've known you sinse 1st grade"even a weekly phone call couldn't ease the painFirst it's St.Thomas, then it's Ft.lauderdaleNow I'm in Tallahassee, in social betrailOnce again...That door will closeAnother door will openA bloomed rose dies, and its last words are "the end"Story - This one is about me, and how my family moves to much. And when i say goodbye to one I have another to start over in. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Hippoman789 Posted March 20, 2009 Share Posted March 20, 2009 meh it was ok.also Sense… Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Irhymer Posted March 20, 2009 Share Posted March 20, 2009 @Hippoman:> meh it was ok.ok…. :icon_crap:...@Hippoman:> also Sense…what? :huh: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Hippoman789 Posted March 20, 2009 Share Posted March 20, 2009 you said Sensenot Since. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Irhymer Posted March 20, 2009 Share Posted March 20, 2009 oh i spell checked it fast, and it changed it to sense. lol :embarrassed: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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