Alpha Posted March 28, 2009 Author Share Posted March 28, 2009 This is my first sprite, I think it looks pretty nice, but what about you?I can't draw eyes so the head is at another angle.x/10.-Alpha Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Posted March 28, 2009 Share Posted March 28, 2009 8/10 boots look wierd with that extra line. but dude uve got talent i sware. P.S. I love the beast lords sprites by paul, arent they magnifecent? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Alpha Posted March 28, 2009 Author Share Posted March 28, 2009 Yeah, they look pretty cool.Thanks!-Alpha Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Posted March 28, 2009 Share Posted March 28, 2009 its ok but the head shouldn't be like that. And the shield is held way out. The depth on it is not very good either. Depth isn't just darken areas near ouline. Its darken certain areas and brighten others. I like your idea of how his feet are, but they really have a terrable outline and absolutely no depth. The shield has no depth or texture.5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Posted March 28, 2009 Share Posted March 28, 2009 slym u always rate wicked bad lol xD Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Eguroth Posted March 28, 2009 Share Posted March 28, 2009 I say 6/10.The boots look odd due to the white lin running down them. The shield and sword have little/no detail. Should practice eyes and faces and actually make it face the right way.You should add more depth to the clothes, and make the shield look better. At the moment its a single colour, same as the sword.:) Other than that good job Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
dray777 Posted March 28, 2009 Share Posted March 28, 2009 im not a master spriter but i did study anatomy for 2 years, but id say 6.5/10 only because this, the head is a little too extreme angle, its perfectly to the side whcich is uncomfortable for almoist everyone (stop twisting your head and move on…) and how he is holding the shield he would be holding it more toward his body and his arm would be more cocked (<- not a bad word....) i think if you make the head just a little less turned and bring the shield in a bit and add a little texture to the shield i think id give you a 10/10 hope i wasn't too mean but it looks really good and has alot of potential to be a great sprite. lemme know if i was too mean cus i know what it feels like when people give you tough critism (kreator has commented on many of my posts...) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ddunit Posted March 29, 2009 Share Posted March 29, 2009 Boots are fine, the sheild is like wtf, the pose is O-o, and the head is pillow shaded.Most of these errors are normal for a first try, 7/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
paulking Posted March 29, 2009 Share Posted March 29, 2009 7,5 i like the boots =P Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jaiden Posted March 29, 2009 Share Posted March 29, 2009 You made that yourself without a template? Geez. That's pretty good Alpha. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Hippoman789 Posted March 29, 2009 Share Posted March 29, 2009 7/10shield arm is wierd. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Alpha Posted March 29, 2009 Author Share Posted March 29, 2009 I have a first try and people give me great ratings! Thanks!-Alpha Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Hippoman789 Posted March 29, 2009 Share Posted March 29, 2009 zomg its Allah!just kidding but can we see some more?or a screenshot in game? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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