First Maps, Good or Bad?

[xHavokx]

Hey Im pretty much totally new to the whole maping thing, dont get me wrong though I've played my fair share of games from eclipse and from non eclipse, I started making my own game after a player run server from a certain game sparked my curiousity.

Wanted to show a few of my maps which isnt much and want to know if there good or not or maybe ppl can say inprovments or changes they might think I could do, before any input my only critism from myself is that maybe I used to much of the same tiles but thats actually kinda what I was shooting for since I wanted to make towns/dungeons match each other and use as least tiles as I could for more possibilities later on, Thanks in advance. Here's the shots. Also keep in mind this isnt all the maps I have.
Bank
[](http://img197.imageshack.us/my.php?image=92534521.png)
Weapon Shop
[](http://img197.imageshack.us/my.php?image=46404887.png)
Bar/Inn
[](http://img197.imageshack.us/my.php?image=84245267.png)
First Dungeon Layout
[](http://img197.imageshack.us/my.php?image=26121310.png)
[](http://img197.imageshack.us/my.php?image=47561084.png)
[](http://img197.imageshack.us/my.php?image=70364900.png)
[](http://img197.imageshack.us/my.php?image=35106508.png)
[](http://img197.imageshack.us/my.php?image=58668376.png)

[Guest]

Nice but watch the square bits

[Bayes]

On the top of the buildings you dont need all those other squares.

but apart from that there very good for your first maps, Great job :)

[kris_hole]

i'm confused about whats going on with the roof's of the buildings. apart from that they'rree grrreat! (frosties FTW!)

my fav's map number 5\. :)

[shrig94]

Those are really good for a first timer. I don't know exactly what your tile set includes, but try to add a little bit more detail.
Also, wtf, roof?

[jna]

Ill do this by map order.
1: The roof is weird, remove those block or put them all over the roof but not like it is.
The plants in the floor, the only way there can be plants in a cement floor its if it is broken, and it doesn't look broken.
2.Same with roof and plants. The weapon shop sign doesn't meet the quality of the rest.
3.Roof, plants. Also, why it there half a fence in the back of the map?
4\. The opening in the bottom of the fence looks like where you could throw your self.
5\. Nothing wrong.
6\. Nothing wrong.
7\. You should make the left border a little more uneven because it doesn't look natural(unless its man made).
8\. The rail to the right goes into nowhere?
Overall: For them being your first maps, i congratulate you for them being so nice. Rating 8/10

[Pasketi]

Um… Not bad but there is lots of fixing to do. Personally i don't like them. Jna told you what's wrong, i agree with him (mostly at least)

[Stranger]

Quite nice, a lot of attention to detail but not too much stuff.

I just don't like whats going on with the roof of the buildings, and the square paths and other areas could use some transitioning.

Find a better tileset, perhaps.

[Hippoman789]

WTF IS UP WITHT HE BUILDINGS?

anyway, you have alot of mixed tiles. you got bushes coming OUT OF concrete.
you need more detail where detail is needed.
too square
the walls of the cave makes no sense.