ShadowAssassin77 Posted April 19, 2010 Author Share Posted April 19, 2010 Well, since I need a tune up on my pixel art, I decided to create some sidescrolling graphics, I took a look at lostica and shit my pants. I loved em, so I created my version of em :D, no entirely the same, but here ya go.Now dont tell me " YOU STOLE FROM LOSTICA BLA BLA BLA." I dont wanna hear it, I simply looked at the WIP while i did it, so dont give me that bull crap, its just an insparation, tell me what I need to improve on, not what I stole or how much it sucks. Thanks! By the way, I know the cliff is bigger than the house, I edited that and halfed it, and make all different sizes for it, credit MrMiguu with that cliff, he really did it pretty much, I just edited it.Sincerely,**ShadowAssassin77** Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dark Crusade Posted April 19, 2010 Share Posted April 19, 2010 ~~I only caught a glimpse at them before projectile vomiting on the screen, slicing my wrists open at my desk and then crying due to the emotional perceptive pain.~~I uh mean, looking pretty.. uh, good there.. bro. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Patrick Posted April 19, 2010 Share Posted April 19, 2010 It looks like you used the line tool alot. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ShadowAssassin77 Posted April 19, 2010 Author Share Posted April 19, 2010 Yah I did use the line tool a lot. And Kreator, Im not a god like you, its been a few years, and Im a bit rusty, not to mention I was never good before. How can I improve guys?Sincerely,**ShadowAssassin77** Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Patrick Posted April 19, 2010 Share Posted April 19, 2010 Listen to Kreator. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ShadowAssassin77 Posted April 19, 2010 Author Share Posted April 19, 2010 Wow most people in this community always do this. TELL ME HOW I CAN IMPROVE. God.Sincerely,**ShadowAssassin77** Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Myron Posted April 19, 2010 Share Posted April 19, 2010 Tutorials.. Practice.. Practice.. Practice.. Learn what you did wrong.. Practice.. Practice..It's very easy to know, yet hard to do. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Patrick Posted April 20, 2010 Share Posted April 20, 2010 @ShadowAssassin77:> Wow most people in this community always do this. TELL ME HOW I CAN IMPROVE. God.> > Sincerely,> **ShadowAssassin77> > Listen to Kreator.** Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ShadowAssassin77 Posted April 20, 2010 Author Share Posted April 20, 2010 listen to Kreator as in the complete fail or the looking pretty good part?Sincerely,**ShadowAssassin77** Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sealbreaker Posted April 20, 2010 Share Posted April 20, 2010 Why do you even expect help when you are saying like: McNugget's pixeling SUCKS etc. You're not better in helping… So here's what I say:Listen to KreatorOh and... The house looks quite ok... the door is smaller than the sprite ( If that sprite is supposed to fit your tiles)The grass needs more detail... But the sprites are no good...-seal Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ShadowAssassin77 Posted April 20, 2010 Author Share Posted April 20, 2010 rofl haha yeah i gotta fix the door, but whats wrong with the sprites?…Sincerely,**ShadowAssassin77** Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sealbreaker Posted April 20, 2010 Share Posted April 20, 2010 arms, eyes, hair and shape…-seal Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ShadowAssassin77 Posted April 20, 2010 Author Share Posted April 20, 2010 Arms? What about them? :huh: its suppose to be cartoon style. Whats so bad about the eyes? And the hair and the shape? Whats wrong with those specific "wrongs"?Sincerely,**ShadowAssassin77** Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dark Crusade Posted April 20, 2010 Share Posted April 20, 2010 @ShadowAssassin77:> whats wrong with the sprites?…What's not wrong with them unfortately. The entire anatomy, shading, palette, everything is terrible. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ShadowAssassin77 Posted April 20, 2010 Author Share Posted April 20, 2010 I used the same pallete as Lostica. The shading, I admit could use some help, and I mean come one its suppose to be cartoony.Sincerely,**ShadowAssassin77** Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dark Crusade Posted April 20, 2010 Share Posted April 20, 2010 @ShadowAssassin77:> I used the same pallete as Lostica. The shading, I admit could use some help, and I mean come one its suppose to be cartoony.Lol, just because you have excuses doesn't make it any different. The palette is terrible, the three shades of skin are literally identical, and the color choices themselves look bad. The shading is almost inexistant. What little you have is pillow shading mostly. The do not look cartoony, they look horrible. Just because they are of extremely low quality doesn't make it a 'style'. Look at chibi and cartoon sprites from games like maple story, or hell even World of Hyrule. And also, you have no detail.. his body looks like a square block. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ShadowAssassin77 Posted April 20, 2010 Author Share Posted April 20, 2010 Alright, alright, ill fix the sprite, what about the house?Sincerely,**ShadowAssassin77** Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dark Crusade Posted April 20, 2010 Share Posted April 20, 2010 The perspective is so incredibly bad and incorrect…Alright, lets see i'll explain. Look at the damn building; you've shown two different walls at the exact same angle. It's as if the south and east wall of a building has been folded out 90 degrees to make a straight double wall.. thing Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ShadowAssassin77 Posted April 20, 2010 Author Share Posted April 20, 2010 Alright, alright, I get it, I suck, ill stop. pixel nerd..>.>Sincerely,**ShadowAssassin77** Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Techno 5.0 Posted April 20, 2010 Share Posted April 20, 2010 @ShadowAssassin77:> Alright, alright, I get it, I suck, ill stop. ~~pixel nerd~~..>.>> > Sincerely,> **ShadowAssassin77> > its called being an artist> only a slight few of us have that Artist Eye> and aparently you dont have it> > this isnt even bad critism> go post it on that pixel joint website> and see what critism you get> > work on the legs, wheres teh neck> look at human anatomy> > EDIT:> > @ShadowAssassin77:> > > Alright, alright, I get it, I suck, ill stop. ~~pixel nerd~~..>.>> > > > Sincerely,> > **ShadowAssassin77> > @Kreator:> > > > > The perspective is so incredibly bad and incorrect, that it makes me want to maul your face with my pen. =(> > > > Thats not even what Kreator said.> > you asked for critism and that is a form of critism> > gosh its not our fault if you take it the wrong way> > > > pixel art is a form of art which leads to you attempting to be an artist> > artist MUST deal with critism> > Kreator didnt get completely badass with pixels in an hour> > it takes time, practice and inspiration.> > maybe losticas style is not for you> > just take teh critism> > make multiple edits and then come and ask us about it**** Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ShadowAssassin77 Posted April 20, 2010 Author Share Posted April 20, 2010 I was just joking, Kreators really good, and can be really nice to. I know he needs touch ups, he's to square, and he needs better colors and shading, so yea. Ill work on him an post again.Sincerely,**ShadowAssassin77** Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dark Crusade Posted April 20, 2010 Share Posted April 20, 2010 @ShadowAssassin77:> pixel nerd..>.>I didn't even start on the pixel-ling, I pointed out the very basic fact that your perspective for starters is brutally incorrect. I edited my post for you too see-@Kreator:> Alright, lets see I'll explain. Look at the damn building; you've shown two different walls at the exact same angle. It's as if the south and east wall of a building has been folded out 90 degrees to make a straight double wall.. thing@Ninja-Tech:> only a slight few of us have that Artist Eye> and aparently you dont have itHehe, you don't even need to be any sort of artist to see how wrong the perspective is however in that building. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Techno 5.0 Posted April 20, 2010 Share Posted April 20, 2010 if you just joking then why did you report him? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dark Crusade Posted April 20, 2010 Share Posted April 20, 2010 @ShadowAssassin77:> I was just joking, Kreators really good, and can be really nice to.;D@Ninja-Tech:> if you just joking then why did you report him?LMAO Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Techno 5.0 Posted April 20, 2010 Share Posted April 20, 2010 The following post, "Re: Lostica Inspired" by Kreator (Dark Crusade) has been reported by ShadowAssassin77 on a board you moderate:The topic: http://www.touchofdeathforums.com/smf/index.php?topic=59436.msg629316#msg629316Moderation center: ~~http://www.touchofdeathforums.com/sore loser that sucks at pixel art/index.php?action=moderate;=1108~~The reporter has made the following comment:..Regards,The Eclipse - Free 2D Mmorpg Maker Team. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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