Pixel Graffiti

[luriok]

Ok this is my first try to make graffiti with my pixeling skills. ;D
What do you guys think of it?

Here's a pic of it being used: 

[Absolute]

Looks good, but the outline needs adjustment.

[luriok]

Well, I kind of used this as my reference
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Here's a pic of it being used: 

[Absolute]

You need more contrast between the two blue colors.

[luriok]

How's this? The first is the old one, second is the new one.
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[Absolute]

Its better. Your bricks look like metal slates stacked against each other and fell down as if they were dominoes.

[luriok]

Lol first off it's wooden planks and second I threw that together, I'm focusing on the graffiti.

[IceCream Tuesday]

You need more contrast between the blue shades, and the outline, also.. thicken it up a little bit.

[SawQuart]

I like the second. Also, the pallet is hurting my eyes. Tone it down a bit.

[Anna Comnena]

I understand that your source didn't have a dark outline between the letters, but I think it would help for a tile/sprite graphic.

[luriok]

At ICT and Jungletoe I need more contrast between which blues? 

@Anna I will do that later thanks.

Ok I darkened the lines between the letters. Is it better?  OK I barely darkened it,b but is it enough?

[DocDanger]

A bold black outline would look good on this.