aaaron Posted February 13, 2011 Author Share Posted February 13, 2011 Ok, so i'm working on my sprite for my game at the moment and I need your advice on what I should change and etc. Here it is. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
VitinhooxD Posted February 13, 2011 Share Posted February 13, 2011 Well it doesnt look good . Shade the outline and make it look more like humanish , there is no shading the eyes are ridiculous. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
aaaron Posted February 13, 2011 Author Share Posted February 13, 2011 Ok, here's an update following Vitin's comment. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
aaaron Posted February 13, 2011 Author Share Posted February 13, 2011 How does it look?This is an update….. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Posted February 13, 2011 Share Posted February 13, 2011 It doesnt look good.Also you need to change how the chest muscles look,becose they look bad.But after remaking the sprite couple of times you will improve. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
mitlark Posted February 13, 2011 Share Posted February 13, 2011 Change the background color, of course :P. After that, you better do the shading in a different way, because the light direction is messed up, and fells like if it was a concave bisel. As for the chest muscles, try to not use too many details, remember that you have reduced space, and you need to select properly which details you want to add (and too much detail shades tend to mess up with the shape).Hope it helps you, good luck,L'ark Mitsinikos Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Chief Posted February 13, 2011 Share Posted February 13, 2011 He looks pillow shaded, like he was sewn together, lol.Try for something a tad larger. Sure, I get the style you're going for, but something so small, it would almost be best not to shade, so larger is a better idea. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
aaaron Posted February 13, 2011 Author Share Posted February 13, 2011 Ok, I will make them better.. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ceriux Posted February 14, 2011 Share Posted February 14, 2011 your sprite isn't as bad as they're saying, although I would say that sprite looks pretty anatomic compared to most 2d sprites used here. so I would suggest adding a neck even if its barely visible. cause right now he sorta looks kind funny because of not having one. even the sprites from k722's banner has necks if you look.ps: when adding the neck be sure that the head actually sit's atop the shoulders, not on top of the chest. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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