Octohunter Posted August 12, 2011 Author Share Posted August 12, 2011 So, these are for a game I'm helping a friend to make. Comments?Just so you know, I can't sprite eyes at all for some reason. Suggestions/help would be nice.[](http://www.freemmorpgmaker.com/files/imagehost/#e70ba0347cefcee989ed91fdd47b16be.PNG) (v1)[](http://www.freemmorpgmaker.com/files/imagehost/#386a094fdb5b4be561044ffc3f5bfd4c.PNG) (v2)[](http://www.freemmorpgmaker.com/files/imagehost/#b453f959202c81fcbeaf26344b50f3c5.PNG) (v3)[](http://www.freemmorpgmaker.com/files/imagehost/#4f3f7b53c1584ee623d25ced8fdc418b.PNG) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Harris6310 Posted August 12, 2011 Share Posted August 12, 2011 The head shape is good. I suggest you make the arms stick out a little less and do something about those eyes. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Octohunter Posted August 12, 2011 Author Share Posted August 12, 2011 That's just it. I can't sprite eyes, no matter how hard eye (seewatIdidthar?) try. I'll fix the sticking out arms.EDIT: fixed arms[](http://www.freemmorpgmaker.com/files/imagehost/#386a094fdb5b4be561044ffc3f5bfd4c.PNG) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SawQuart Posted August 12, 2011 Share Posted August 12, 2011 http://web.cs.wpi.edu/~claypool/courses/frontiers-09/sprite-tutorial.pdfRead the part about the eyes. If that style just isn't your cup of tea, try looking at Zelda sprites and zoom in at 800%. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Octohunter Posted August 12, 2011 Author Share Posted August 12, 2011 Bam. Eyes.[](http://www.freemmorpgmaker.com/files/imagehost/#b453f959202c81fcbeaf26344b50f3c5.PNG)Turns out, the eye style I abhorred for my other project work okay with this style. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
azkanan Posted August 12, 2011 Share Posted August 12, 2011 It needs more shading. Shading is what forms the brows, fixing your eye problem. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Fuu Posted August 13, 2011 Share Posted August 13, 2011 @Azkabanana:> It needs more shading. Shading is what forms the brows, fixing your eye problem.It needs _better_ shading. You shouldn't just trace the outline. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Octohunter Posted August 13, 2011 Author Share Posted August 13, 2011 Do you mean "you shouldn't trace the outline", or "you shouldn't JUST trace the outline"?And how can I improve the shading? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Roxanna Posted August 13, 2011 Share Posted August 13, 2011 Avoid pillow shading and think about how the shadows/shading/colouring would be if it had an actual light source. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Fuu Posted August 13, 2011 Share Posted August 13, 2011 @Octohunter:> Do you mean "you shouldn't trace the outline", or "you shouldn't JUST trace the outline"?> And how can I improve the shading?It took me a while to understand that question. I meant you shouldn't trace the outline. Sorry. Lol. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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