first story iv wrote so im sure theirs grammar errors here and there but tell me what you think please :) also this isnt finished this is just the beginning of it The year is 2792 nearly 700 years ago humans nearly destroyed the Earth… When they did this they were trying to end the “war of Freedomâ€Â. The war started in the year 1998\. It was started first over whether or not prisoners of war should become slaves. The country Gosu wanted to exchange the prisoners they had obtained in the war of 1989 for the prisoners that Dybre had captured. But Dybre was a very poor nation and instead of exchanging the prisoners they used them as slaves. The two countries negotiated for years until 1996,Then Gosu began to negotiate with other countries to help them defeat Dybre and bring freedom to those prisoners. Finally in the year of 1998 war was declared. This war became known as “The war of Freedomâ€Â. Scientists worked night and day to discover what they could do in terms of biological warfare to help. One day a scientist by the name of Sarah Motis came across the idea to switch all scientifically efforts from biological warfare to bomb technology. It took her 4 years to get the government to agree, but when they finally did it proved to be a good decision. In the year 2013 they discovered what they called “The Motis Bombâ€Â. The Motis bomb was not used just yet though. Gosu’s government took another 3 years to approve the launching of this bomb. When this bomb it was thought to be a huge success because the effects were gradual. However after there was a group of soldiers sent to examine the remains of Dybre they all lost their memory as soon as they came into contact with the land that was bombed. Then their was a freak explosion 10 miles north of Dybre this explosion was much stronger then the initial explosion. After this explosion many others followed until the entire Cass continent was destroyed. Once news of this reached Gosu they immediately started to research what went wrong and to reverse the effects. They only came to one solution and that was to reset planet earth but the only way they could do that was to launch another bomb. With their last bomb as a failure and only 3 years until the “Motis Explosions†as they came to be called would reach Gosu and destroy it. They had to get the governments approval to study this technology, at first the government refused to research another bomb, but then a new scientist came along his name was John Stork. Dr.Stork proved that this bomb was their only chance at continuing humanity and the government approved the research in the year of 2023\. It was now a race against time the explosions were reaching Gosu quickly with only one and a half years left research had to be fast. Dr.Stork found that the only way was to launch this bomb to put out the explosions but it would also send humans back to the stone age with no memory. The Motis Explosions were half a year away and the government had yet to approve the bomb, but one day the explosions began on the west side of the Jaedong continent. The government approved the bomb once they heard that the Jaedong continent was exploding as they Spork. The bomb was launched and the explosions stopped as the human race enjoyed its last minutes of advanced culture before going back to the stone age. edit: added line breaks
