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broader shoulders better? 

@Zetasis: > Don't worry man they sucked anyways. they really werent that bad lol.

I'm slightly shocked by that drawing. I just lol'd when I saw it tho. :P I think I get what ur saying tho.

@Frosty: > guy on the left is fat. guy on the right is ripped but has a huge head. the 1st one is garbage. The second one tho… I was going for ripped and a big head. I think I want it to be customizable where they can pick between normal, ripped, and hairy. But does it look like a decent playable sprite, and not look to outta wack? I'm still new at this AB. What do u mean by too low lol?

no the reason I'm switching is I don't like how little detail I can add with some of my items, plus I want my swords to not have to go so far out diagonal so it doesn't cross my guys face and force me to hide his face. So its gonna be redone. :P I added a shaded version as well.

Title says it. After realizing the girl I was making looked horrible, I also realized i hated my gfx. So before I make any more items, weapons, or ect. I want to remake the sprite so it is more paperdoll friendly, and will look better when things are added on. The look I'm going for is just that of a paperdoll, if that makes since. Open and you can add a lot of customization when adding different items, ect ect. Anywho… tell me what you think of the general outline of the guy. Ignore the shading as it doesn't matter for jack atm. here is a before and after. the after being less shaded. < (shaded)  < (broader shoulders)  male and female. 

For your first tiles awesome work. Don't get down when people tell you its horrid and terrible, because its your 1st time. But kyoghin hit a lot of good points, so I won't need to say much. I like the retro style. It would be nice to see a "naked look" on one of the sprites so we can see more on a base of what your working with. Plus if you want to see more for your style check out some old Nes games and see how stuff was done, u won't be able to pull off some of the things they messed up on tho back in the day, but you will get a good feel of what your going for and what kind of patterns, colors, and pixel styles you can work with.

Lol no flaming. A game that is 100 to 95 is better than any game 1 - 0\. o disrespect to Soccer playing counrties winners are winners and if US was good at soccer I'd be singing a different story… BTW sickey I've already been doing workouts that are good for handball players. Come after this year Olympics I'm trying out for the U.S handball team. We suck at it and I think it would be an easy team to make. Anyways get on Hamchi. :D

hey man hey…. better than soccer.

I could care less if anyone cares, but my team not only won their 1st game in the playoffs in NBA history this year they just won their 1st play series as well being the #8 seed vs the #1 seed. So I'm celebrating. Gotta give the shout out. Please don't hate, this is like the Cleveland Browns winning a playoff game or even two for that matter. =D

ughh this is stressing me out lol. I think I have to start over.

You think with hair it would look just like a girl regardless? Idk I feel like there is something still super man like about her. I just can't put my finger on it.

And here we go again XP 

get on hami? here is the second attempt 

So tell me straight up how do I get this chick lookin less like a bro and more like a hoe =D….... For real tho, How can I make my female sprite look less man like. Other than adding hair lol. I need her to look like a girl even if she is bald. Maybe its hard to make her look like a girl when she has no hair? idk..  < 

@Frosty: > The garden Quest xD > GNOME TIME Gnome Time sounds like it would be one hella a party.

I lol'd at my list… Knight Endless Fairy War for the Flames Quest of the Final Dragon The Blade War Fairy Lord Prophecy of the Hearts The Glowing Music Lord The Everlasting Love Night Story Shining Blade Immortal Story Legend for the Forgotten Diamonds Fairy Lord = winner.

@Anna: > The Lost Vikings, and Blackthorne are the best Blizzard games. I'm glad someone recognized, for real real, no play play.

@Diagothan: > Going to be honest here and save you some time, I'm sure others will just say "looks good" or whatever. > I wouldn't play a game with these sprites. > The rats don't look like rats; they're hard to sprite because they're small, so maybe consider scaling everything up. Even the people look very small, it's going to be impossible to fit any sort of decent detail on there. > The wall and floor tiles don't really loop very well and are low-contrast, they look bland. > Same with the rats and people, everything is low-contrast with not much shading and it doesn't look very appealing. > > Sorry to burst your bubble but I'm just telling you how I, as a player, would see it if I were to play this game. Consider practicing more before working on an entire game with these, and at the least use more shading (in the right way, learn to shade. Don't pillow shade or over-shade.) and also I'd suggest making everything bigger to fit more detail in. > > Hope you appreciate I'm giving honest advice rather than just telling you it's good enough when it isn't. he is right they are small, I would recommended making the sprites bigger, unless it has to do more with the style you are going with. If its more of a retro style then the smaller guys are fine. Thats going to have to be your call. The rats tho I think are fine. Rats are generally small and if they are in a dungeon and some low level meaningless creature then they are fine. But the shading on the disk could be a bit more, try different ways of making it look like more of a wood grain. You can google different types of wood for example. But the rat is very similar to the rat from Zelda Link to the Past, google it as well. ;).. But I've already told you that. For your 1st attempt and coming from the stuff you were making a few weeks ago I give you a 100% improvement. But on the grand scale I'm going to give it a 3.5/10\. On a rating scale were the GFX in my game are a 5\. If that gives you an example of where I think you are at atm. Post the frog as well. I think someone might be able to explain to you what I was saying about the back view.

The Lost Vikings by Blizzard Entertainment

@Urimas: > updated 1st post with new video and sprite demos! loved the video, this game seems like it will be legit with lots of fun stuff to do. ;) love the flying. will the ponies have the ability to fly over blocked tiles?

I like the website a lot! U plan on using custom gfx I assume?

I like them all tbh. Demonic sword would have to be my favorite, for obvious reasons. Keep it up man. Are these gfx you plan on using in your game?

So obviously this doesn't involve the engine but this involves my game production.. is it hard to replace a laptop screen? I've watched some videos on you tube and it seems pretty pop and place. Just wanted to know if anybody had been there done that.

honestly don't get mad but…... I love these haha. :). A+ I'll play this game all day if u got some cool lookin gfx like this with it. :))