Having some problems.

[Bobbus]

Basically im stuck and was wondering if you guys could throw in some ideas as to how to continue this story.

I've already encountered a problem: How  the Malvs and Bols break up and start to hate each other. Because they need to in-game. 

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If you guys could help me with it, it would mean a lot.

[Kusy]

I understand this is a skelleton of a story - not a story itself.

I think you actualy writen it already… Malv went with that demon dude so let's make him evil. They started to worship him instead of theyre old gods. Of course they had to do it bloody - human sacrificing, narcotic transes... and well... um - training assasins (let's say that before all the humans were honorable and they wouldn't assasinate others).

Now let's give the Bols (I don't like the name - it's like... boobs) an oracle. And let's say that oracle was friggin inspired by gods and sayed that Malvsomeone is realy an evil bastard (it sayed it after the Malvs left) and that Malvs are lost forever and the only thing that can be done for them is beating them straight to the ground.

[Robin]

Looks like it was written for a children's book.