ResBaK Online 1st Map

[BugSICK]

This is my first ever to post my game called Resbak Online. because I'm too shy to show to other people what i've been doing.

This is my First Map on an Island. (actually this is a tutorial map)  :)


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Tell me what you think  :)

[Sylexus44]

WHOA!!!

That map is great, how'd you do the shading? I must say I'm throughly impressed, 9/10

[BugSICK]

thank you very much.  :embarrassed:

just use a Microsoft word for the alignment and Paint. thats all.

[Techno 5.0]

VERY VERY GOOD

im looking forward to this ;)

9/10

i like the background clouds!

[Drag0n]

8/10 NICE MAP! Only problem I see is that the tiles (e.g. grass going into sand) are too square.

[Sylexus44]

@Ðragon:

> 8/10 NICE MAP! Only problem I see is that the tiles (e.g. grass going into sand) are too square.

What? His transition is perfect

[Techno 5.0]

I like the way you have the GUI
its simple yet effective

@[IG:

> [PWN][SB] Sylexus link=topic=39837.msg388070#msg388070 date=1236131112]
> What? His transition is perfect

agreed

Dragon somethn is wrong with ur eyes lol

[Drag0n]

I jsut suggest using more flowing, not left down left down left down. more like sw sw sw sw sw. (sw = southwest)

[BugSICK]

thanks for the comments, this will help me improve my game.  :)

[Anna Comnena]

Map looks good, only problem mapping wise is the repetitive flowers. Tiles though, the shading of the palm tree clump is neat, but the shadows themselves are poor; too dark, too solid.

[BugSICK]

@Anna:

> but the shadows themselves are poor; too dark, too solid.

coz its an island and its a sunny day (just ignore the time)

hmmmm.. on a second thought i think its too dark. =)

thanks for the comment again.

[Hippoman789]

9/10
great work!!
i wish the graphics were your own.
and 7/10 for the GUI!

[BugSICK]

@Hippoman:

> i wish the graphics were your own.

how i wish ^_^, but i just got the tiles on an RPG site. but the workings are 100% coming from me.

and thanks for the rating guys ^_^

[Waffle]

AWESOME MAP!!!! 10/10!!! NO 20/10!! :cheesy:

[BugSICK]

thanks, 20??? not too much,  :cheesy:

[Waffle]

Lol  :cheesy:

[BugSICK]

actually in my real game, theirs a seagull lol.  ;)

[Waffle]

Cool….lulz

[Guest]

very nice. First map i have seen in years with a background.

[BugSICK]

@slym:

> very nice. First map i have seen in years with a background.

Really? hmmm.. thats weird.

[The Oracle]

@Anna:

> Map looks good, only problem mapping wise is the repetitive flowers. Tiles though, the shading of the palm tree clump is neat, but the shadows themselves are poor; too dark, too solid.

yeah, i would suggest semitransparent shadows (every other pixel is black) to give it a cool "shadowy" effect.

[Zarnick123]

ok good looking map, Just to make this clear, they arnt his graphics. But excellent use of them. I do like the map a lot.

Some errors you did make:

Dragon is right, Your sand to grass is way to square.

The flowers are very repetative.

I know the large group of trees looks cool and all, but if that huge group was there dont you think there would be more then 3 other trees on the island. The "Clump" gives the illusion of like a Forested tropical island.

Also is Background From Maple Story?

And lastly, the "Clump" has an awkward shading to it. The other trees are extremly light but are the same type of tree. I would consider changing that.

Otherwise I give it a 6/10  Lots of room to improve

[BugSICK]

thanks, the BG was from RPG site. i think every mapper knows it. hope so, honestly everybody knows im new and i am not a great mapper nor a great/good game maker, i just get some ideas to other members map, and i made my own map. im not really good in making tiles, those tiles were taken from E2.7 tile5(i think) and the trees were some site.

but then again, thanks for the rating, it improves me a lot.

[zach4873]

bug that interior map is AMAZING i definately want to play your game lol

[BugSICK]

sure i love too, thanks  :embarrassed: , but that's the only i got for now.