LaurenciaX Posted March 6, 2009 Author Share Posted March 6, 2009 What do you think about it? :confused1: What I need to change? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Waffle Posted March 6, 2009 Share Posted March 6, 2009 This looks awesome for your first map, HELL it's better then any map that i've made :S Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
dray777 Posted March 6, 2009 Share Posted March 6, 2009 Good side: Loved the shadowinglove how the peices go so well together (EG: someone the other day had sand in the middle of the forest.)Constructive critisism: i do think it is a bit plain and repetitive you can add some more things here and thereOverall: GREAT WORK! :cheesy: this is a great map for your first time and dont worry you'll get better. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
LaurenciaX Posted March 6, 2009 Author Share Posted March 6, 2009 Thanx… :embarrassed: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Skell Posted March 6, 2009 Share Posted March 6, 2009 Shadowing isn't good, the bottom of the clock shouldn't be as big as the top when looking at the shadow, there is also the other shadows, but you probaly already can see that yourself. The shadowing also sometimes changes, I mean sometimes the light looks like it comes from the upper of the map while other places it looks like it is from the bottom of the map.It looks too symmetric and you should try use diffirent objects, also try to change the floor alittle.You should also try make stuff in the sides of the map to make it stick with the maps that is going to be near it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Waffle Posted March 6, 2009 Share Posted March 6, 2009 God skell it's his first map, you don't have to be so harsh, it was good for his first map… Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Skell Posted March 6, 2009 Share Posted March 6, 2009 @[Cube:> Waffle link=topic=39962.msg389766#msg389766 date=1236345408]> God skell it's his first map, you don't have to be so harsh, it was good for his first map…No, I do not think it is good at all, why may I not tell what I think could be better? It isn't harsh, it is the real world, you have to learn that it won't help saying to an african "It is ok, you maked a lot of money today" even though he didn't earn enough money to survive, that will just end with him dying of hunger.Tell the problem instead of lying. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Waffle Posted March 6, 2009 Share Posted March 6, 2009 What ever….I know it's the real world.....Im just saying u coulda been nicer :P Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Skell Posted March 6, 2009 Share Posted March 6, 2009 @[Cube:> Waffle link=topic=39962.msg389782#msg389782 date=1236347282]> What ever….I know it's the real world.....Im just saying u coulda been nicer :PWell, I did think of saying that everything else looked nice enough, but then I realized that I already told that everything doesn't look good :P Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Waffle Posted March 6, 2009 Share Posted March 6, 2009 WELL AT LEAST YOU THOUGHT OF IT LOL…. :P Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ZelconGames Posted March 6, 2009 Share Posted March 6, 2009 It is a bit repetitive, and you messed up on part of the shading, but for a first map, 4.5/5. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Waffle Posted March 6, 2009 Share Posted March 6, 2009 Yea you messed shading up a bit…. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
The Oracle Posted March 6, 2009 Share Posted March 6, 2009 my only complaint is that the shadows don't match Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Hippoman789 Posted March 7, 2009 Share Posted March 7, 2009 needs detail.nice for a first.shades are crap.allw hite. no color.6/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ENIGMAX Posted March 7, 2009 Share Posted March 7, 2009 i like that it has space… freedom to move around that is good :P 5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ddunit Posted March 9, 2009 Share Posted March 9, 2009 muttersGround looks repetitive.Too much things of the same looks in one place. If you get what I mean ._. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nubbs Posted March 9, 2009 Share Posted March 9, 2009 take some tables and benchs out of it and i think it would be fine after you fixed the shadows(which is cool that you even thought about those on your first map..i didn't) it seems too crowded with the all the benches, tables, and flowers.. but over all its a good theme great job Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Waffles Posted March 9, 2009 Share Posted March 9, 2009 over all nice for a 1st map1 thing i didn't like is that there's no balance Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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