First part of Cave

[Owen F]

[](http://www.freemmorpgmaker.com/files/imagehost/#7cddd03af63209b8f0e9386d9f5f24cb.jpg)

Yeah thats like the beginning of my cave? what do you guys reckon and what suggestions ya got for me =D

[Drummerpete]

Symmetry = Not good.

[Owen F]

@Bob:

> Symmetry = Not good.

True.
Thanks, =P

[Tyr]

as bob says, the walls are way to symmetric, its not a natural wall of a cave you see?

take a look at the Aura tutorial dungeon, you might find some inspiration there:

[http://www.touchofdeathforums.com/smf/index.php/topic,40191.0.html](http://www.touchofdeathforums.com/smf/index.php/topic,40191.0.html)

[Hippoman789]

symmetry, no detail, its more of a chasm than a cave, NO DETAIL.

[Owen F]

@Tyr:

> as bob says, the walls are way to symmetric, its not a natural wall of a cave you see?
>
> take a look at the Aura tutorial dungeon, you might find some inspiration there:
>
> [http://www.touchofdeathforums.com/smf/index.php/topic,40191.0.html](http://www.touchofdeathforums.com/smf/index.php/topic,40191.0.html)
> 

I dont think i have all of those tiles (e.g the transition tiles) But i sure WANT em

[Bayes]

Your map lacks detail, even without the transition tiles you can still add detail with rocks and plants.

[Guest]

Needs stuff in it.
and the fact that the walls could fit together if moved is bothering me, lol.

[azkanan]

Don't mistake "Detail" for "Clutter". ;)

Also, ask yourself, why are there two random orb things at the entrance? Unless you have something that looks moreso amazing/rare than those, then I guess it's alright. But otherwise, don't waste pretty things. :)