azure Posted January 21, 2010 Author Share Posted January 21, 2010 Long ago when I was just starting High school I wrote this. I don't know what to call it, so I guess it's a piece of prose. it wasn't meant to have any underlying meaning, but as I read it again it seems odd to me. Either way, I never really shared it with anyone until now.In the hour of our demise the one with the key shall come,And they with their companions will bring the world to salvation,The door to paradise will open with the beginning of a war.Peace will come of disaster and the anarchy will rule all but those in paradise.So come oh those of faith and find your destiny.Help the one to paradise. for they have the weapon to win the war, the key to the door.The serenades of the wind will soothe the wounds of those who survive.This will be the hope of all and the downfall of one.And they will be lost once again till they are needed next. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dthen Posted January 21, 2010 Share Posted January 21, 2010 That's actually pretty well written. High five. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
azure Posted January 21, 2010 Author Share Posted January 21, 2010 Thank you. *High Five* :P I used to be a poet, but I gave a lot of my "artiness" up because Intelligent art isn't what people like in High School, or College for that matter… So my best stuff I usually keep to myself. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Drummerpete Posted January 21, 2010 Share Posted January 21, 2010 I'm tempted to do some textual analysis on it. But I'm too lazy just now.Just might help find a good meaning for it :P Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
azure Posted January 21, 2010 Author Share Posted January 21, 2010 When I re read it I found hints of Kingdom Hearts and the Bible.. which is funny because I was reading the bible at that time( read it all the way through) and I had just started playing kingdom hearts. There's a line that's .Hack related, but this is in hind site mind you. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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