A little bit of my game pokemon mystery dungeon united nations!

[TPK]

hi im TPK owner of pokemon united nations the pokemon mystery dungeon mmo at http://www.pokemonunations.com/ and this is some of my game im not ganna show to many maps but I hope you like it so far oops the maps are data files but ill upload them and then post them later gatta hit the bed now bye.

[Helpmeplz]

Did you use paint? Anyways the title and buttons don't go well with the background and whats with the exit button? Errr text looks poorly done? Sorry everything looks pasted. XD. That loading bar is nice thought. Try going with a theme thats more Pocket Monster-ish.

P.S Don't use paint. ;D

[Thorn]

@TPK:

> hi im TPK owner of pokemon united nations the pokemon mystery dungeon mmo at http://www.pokemonunations.com/ and this is some of my game im not ganna show to many maps but I hope you like it so far oops the maps are data files but ill upload them and then post them later gatta hit the bed now bye.

OW OW OW MY EYES

Hi I'm TPK, owner of Pokemon United Nations, the Pokemon Mystery Dungeon MMO at http://www.pokemonunations.com/ and this is some of my game. I'm not gonna show too many maps, but I hope you like it so far. Oops, the maps are data files but I'll upload them and then post them later. Gotta hit the bed now, bye.

Fix'd. You get one free, you type like that again and I'll have Marsh do something horrible.
GRAMMAR NAZI AWAYYYY

[TPK]

…......-.-' my grammar is terrible i know but really like seriously you just had to make a post you could have just sent me a msg or something.......pretty rude-.-'''.

[SawQuart]

@Thorn:

> @TPK:
>
> > hi im TPK owner of pokemon united nations the pokemon mystery dungeon mmo at http://www.pokemonunations.com/ and this is some of my game im not ganna show to many maps but I hope you like it so far oops the maps are data files but ill upload them and then post them later gatta hit the bed now bye.
>
> OW OW OW MY EYES
>
> Hi I'm TPK, owner of Pokemon United Nations, the Pokemon Mystery Dungeon MMO at http://www.pokemonunations.com/ and this is some of my game. I'm not gonna show too many maps, but I hope you like it so far. Oops, the maps are data files but I'll upload them and then post them later. Gotta hit the bed now, bye.
>
> Fix'd. You get one free, you type like that again and I'll have Marsh do something horrible.
> GRAMMAR NAZI AWAYYYY

LOL

Anyway, those random letters that you pasted onto the GUI look horrible. At least turn them different ways…

[Thorn]

You're trying to drum up support for your game. I respect that. But if you know that your grammar is terrible, spend a few moments and go over it once. It makes it a lot less painful for everyone else to read.
Grammarless posts don't exactly give people a lot of respect for your project. Just take the few seconds needed to punctuate stuff.

[luriok]

Hey not sure if I'm the first to see this but you mispelled nation you spelled natiom instead(its in the main menu). Or is that how its suppose to be?

[TPK]

ehh i didnt do the main menu