DocDanger Posted December 27, 2010 Author Share Posted December 27, 2010 This is a chiptune I made in about 20 minutes using FamiTracker. I"m collaborating with JS1 on some projects. Please leave _constructive_ C&C. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
JSchilli1 Posted December 27, 2010 Share Posted December 27, 2010 He speaks the truth.-JS1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SawQuart Posted December 27, 2010 Share Posted December 27, 2010 I'm downloading it as we speak…Edit w/ Advice:1-12sVery good. The bass goes well with the main melody.13-19sVery bad. It just seems like a bunch of random, fast paced notes.Try learning and experimenting with arps that go through a differentscale. The scales you're using don't sound scary or dungeonish, butrather high-pitched and annoying.20-Isn't this just repeating? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Drummerpete Posted December 27, 2010 Share Posted December 27, 2010 Maybe more variation in the melody.I noticed the same not being repeated over, and over, and over… etc.. again, near the end.Sounded pretty good though. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DocDanger Posted December 27, 2010 Author Share Posted December 27, 2010 This was just a rough draft type thing. I plan on fixing it. I made this on a whim and hope to improve it. Thanks for the feedback so far :DD Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SawQuart Posted December 27, 2010 Share Posted December 27, 2010 Keep those instruments though! I suggest you add more brass-ish instruments and strings if you're re-editing the song. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DocDanger Posted December 27, 2010 Author Share Posted December 27, 2010 I'm currently using FamiTracker and I currently have mild expierence with the instrument editor and I have yet to figure out some of the more advanced aspects of it. I will try to find out how to make a violin/viola type sounding instrument because I think that would sound really cool. I also see your point on the fast part of the song. This was just a rough demo an I will perfect it soon :D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DocDanger Posted December 28, 2010 Author Share Posted December 28, 2010 Well I buckled down and fixed my chiptune from yesterday. I kept the first part but threw out all the rest and made it much longer and also made it less repetitive then my song from yesterday. I also renamed it "Hero's Triumph" because I think it sounded like a triumph. Please leave constructive honest criticism. I would appreciate it greatly :D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
JSchilli1 Posted December 29, 2010 Share Posted December 29, 2010 You could have edited your old topic. Sounds good overall, though.-JS1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kusy Posted December 29, 2010 Share Posted December 29, 2010 dun dun duuuuun… topics merged, use the edit option next time. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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