darkserver Posted February 2, 2012 Author Share Posted February 2, 2012 here are my items i pixled my selfplease tell me how to improve my work**UPDATE**: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
kris_hole Posted February 3, 2012 Share Posted February 3, 2012 The swords look cool, they have a very toon shader/zelda style to them, i like it, however the potion bottles seem a bit too flat, and big…Just my opinion mind.Good work man. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
darkserver Posted February 3, 2012 Author Share Posted February 3, 2012 what do you mean by flat? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
_Her0 Posted February 4, 2012 Share Posted February 4, 2012 I agree with Kris, the swords are pretty cool, they give a nice feel to them, some old schoolish feel. I also agree with him on the potions, they do look flat. They need to look round, like such, where as yours look as if its just outline or something. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Fuu Posted February 6, 2012 Share Posted February 6, 2012 @darkserver:> what do you mean by flat?He doesn't mean _flat_ or anything. They look like paper. Sheets.Fix the perspective. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lukin Posted February 6, 2012 Share Posted February 6, 2012 Added another shade, plus changed the outline to fit the blue. Could still use some work but you see what they mean I guess, can't just dither from straight up to down and make people believe it's spherical. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SawQuart Posted February 7, 2012 Share Posted February 7, 2012 Better, but you're still pillow shading. Try looking up Kreator's sword tutorial. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Murdoc Posted February 7, 2012 Share Posted February 7, 2012 The new shades on the bottles look good. Doing top down doesnt seem to work well.The swords look alright. But they should have a lighter gray possibly when reaching the top. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Fuu Posted February 7, 2012 Share Posted February 7, 2012  Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lukin Posted February 7, 2012 Share Posted February 7, 2012 So wait.. Are you people actually thinking I'm the OP? O.oI just changed one of the blue potions so he could see that he can't just pillow shade..Not sure how you can see any other improvement Jungle. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Murdoc Posted February 7, 2012 Share Posted February 7, 2012 @Lukin:> So wait.. Are you people actually thinking I'm the OP? O.o> > I just changed one of the blue potions so he could see that he can't just pillow shade..> Not sure how you can see any other improvement Jungle.No, I was merely pointing out how you shaded it well. In regards to the shading on the sword I was refering to the OP Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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