SkyStudios Posted May 17, 2012 Author Share Posted May 17, 2012 [](http://www.freemmorpgmaker.com/files/imagehost/#beb991037309e27fbe9dc8b31e1376c1.bmp) i know i`ve posted allot of swords but still need feedbacks to get better in this. you guyz already helped me allot but i want to be better ^^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Posted May 17, 2012 Share Posted May 17, 2012 I'm sorry but it looks horrible. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Chief Posted May 17, 2012 Share Posted May 17, 2012 Before you try to do anything that has extra detail and crazy designs to it, you need to first perfect doing simple things. Make a regular sword.Things you need to work on:Your Line-artHue ShiftingThe colour on your outlines (should not be black) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Yxxe Posted May 17, 2012 Share Posted May 17, 2012 @Lumiere:> I'm sorry but it looks horrible.Constructive criticism at its best. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Minilinkki Posted May 19, 2012 Share Posted May 19, 2012 @Niall:> Constructive criticism at its best.Indeed.It has one of these "fat outlines" which makes it look fat. Also it doesn't have any symmetric style on it, so it looks more like it's broken sword on field.I prefer you to try make it more symmetric and it will raise it's "coolness".Also if possible, get a new palette on it. That red doesn't really fit on anything on that. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Fuu Posted May 19, 2012 Share Posted May 19, 2012 Yeah, what he said. Shift them hues. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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