Chakkra

Thanks for all of the feedback, especially Anna. Very helpful. Updated "Feb 13" post.

**Sunday, Feb 13:** -Added/edited a few things here and there -Short grass now has water edges -Cliff has more "angle depth" -Added to water's edge >! **I had to re-map the entire thing all over again… Because I didn't save it.. >.>** 

@Kreator: > Your palette is inconsistent. Are you making up colors or did you design a predetermined palette? Also, your cliff needs depth. I just sorta.. make up the colors as I go along.

Tuesday, Feb 8 - 7:06 PM: Added larger trees.

@The_Auctioner: > The tree looks nice IMO, will there be big trees? Yessir. Not too much bigger. Maybe double the size of these ones.

@zidsal: > [](http://img35.imageshack.us/I/needswork.png/) > > you need to redo the sizes of everything and make them in perspective of each other, are you trying to tell me a sign is almost the same size as a tree? > > plus the way the tree looks it looks like you're looking at it from a different angle comapred to everything else. The water pool also needs work it doesn't really have depth it just kind of looks flat and I'm pretty sure you can't get 2d pools. > > thats my 2 cent's The pool is shallow.. So obviously there won't be any depth. The sign is the wrong perspective, not the tree. oh, and The sign and the tree **_are_** the same size ;D Herp. It's called a style choice. But those are supposed to be small trees anyways.

**Tuesday, Feb 8:** -REVAMPED the grassland tileset (Made small trees, large trees, 4 Different types of grass, Transition tiles for everything) **Sunday, Feb 13:** -Added/edited a few things here and there -Short grass now has water edges **Tuesday, Feb 15:** -Re-shaded the entire cliffside -Added long grass at bottom of cliff -Made cliff more… "Grounded" -Ladder is up against the cliff >! 

@MrMiguu: > _Inspired by Andi_ Only not. Do these look anything like andi's trees? I don't think so. They were inspired by Pokemon…

So.. I tried a rather different approach to making a tree.. There's 2 versions here one with highlights and one without. 

they are rather large and the wrong perspective if intended to be used with my tileset.

It used to work, but now all it says is "Input past end of file" when I try to log in.

Where is the pallet? 1 Color? You can't just make a bunch of rectangles and fill them in with gray and call it a building. You need to add texture and shading.

Fixed the coloring a little. Still looks awful. 

Go right ahead.

Still bright, and now it has no texture.

Fix'd The trees look like shit because I didn't put any effort in changing the color of them correctly. (Before I changed them, they blended in with the new grass color) 

Way too cluttered with the flowers and shrubbery. I can understand what you're trying to do, but you are over doing it.

They aren't rip-offs… SamuGames specifically asked me to create the tiles based on Andi's perspectives.

 Little houses! ::DO NOT argue on my topic please. If someone says something stupid like Robin, just ignore it. Thank you.

@Soul: > Because your the one that contradicts yourself the most. (I'm not being sarcastic or joking, this is the pattern.) > > If you say "I want to be criticized," you're going to get it. If you don't, you're still going to get it. By posting here in Show Off, you pretty much agree you're going to get criticized. Whether it's constructive or not, you're going to get it. When people say, "I don't want it," it makes other people very angry. For example, let's say I write a whole paragraph (as I am doing), and the you say, "Meh, don't care." It'd make me feel like all my work was in vain, because I took the time to try and help you. > > People are honest. I see what you're saying and I can tell where you're coming from and perhaps I do contradict myself quite often. But I have not instigated a single argument in this topic. I attempted to ignore other's stupidity but other people decided to argue with each other is my point.

Why are my topics always the ones being flooded with arguments? >.>

Thank you all for the helpful criticism :) Made a few tweaks on the buildings, not gonna post it because it would just be redundant.

@Wraith: > Ha, your lazy. You just copy and pasted your old sidescrolling game's roof to the first house :P > > They look cool though ;) Haha, I'd rather be resourceful and re-use something that was never going to be used! It's better than taking another 3 hours to make a brand new building. The other 2 buildings took around 3 hours each to make. :P

Here are a few building types I've created for "Not Another MMORPG" By SamuGames Thought I'd share and see what you all think! >!  I'm not a huge fan of the roof of the second one because I had a lot of trouble trying to make roof shingles for some reason… Any CC would be appreciated!

@Dash, Kakuna can just hop Please tell me that this game is going to be strictly first 151? That would be so awesome :3