Hi, I need some tips for my game his storyline **Story :** When the Earth is full of people (in 2140), they start to move to another planet, they found an liveable planet and call it "World Live". Less then an year later, they launch an rocket to "World Live", but when they try to land on the planet, the rocket crashs! The rocket crew has survive it, its an miracle they think, but the whole rocket crew is transformed into an 2D sprite. They call themselves Mitseray (from mystery) They build an village, and an few years later, there are 8 town's. Jack is the mayor of the town Setai, he's an good mayor and all villager's like him. On one day, Jack decide to visit a few people in the jungle, close by Setai. The next morning he steps into his car and he drive to the jungle, when he see the jungle, he park his car, and he walks into the jungle. An camera crew is filming the mayor his visit, he doesn't like bodyguards, so he's only with the camera crew. But, a few miles before his destination, people with guns start to shoot on Jack and the camera crew, when they think everyone is dead, they leave. But one camera man has survive it, and when the people in Setai see's on the television whats happed, they rescue the camera man. When the camera man is healed, he's tells all the details about the people with guns. They call them Dymonica (from Demonic), and they declare war. If you got some tips/suggestions or anything else, reply it ;)