How does this sound for a game:

[Admiral Refuge]

I have been working on the storyline for this game for awhile now, what does everyone think:

A long time ago, there were ppl living together, they weren’t that strong or that smart, but they managed to hunt for food and farm happily. One day, there was a huge earthquake and split their huge island in 2\. With their current technology, they didn't have any choice, but to accept that they are never going to see anyone on either side of the deep crack again.

As for the people on the one side, still attached with the kingdom, they continued to learn and grow plants, they began exploring the magical arts, began using it for defence….meanwhile on the other side, the ground there was too dead to grow anything, they began hunting for there food, which in-turn they started building up strength.

After about 300-400 years, the 2 kingdoms on each side of the cliff started wondering what happens to their long-lost ancestors, and each side began building half of the bridge. Another 15 years later, the bridge was almost complete, and both sides were able to see their counter-parts. They each gasped. On the one side, the side that was still attached to the kingdom, the people looked weak. They had huge robes on, and carried staffs and wands with them. The other side, with the hunters, they were 1/4 the size larger then the other, with huge mussels and weaponry.

As the garden side(the side still connected to the kingdom) and the rigged side(the other side) was finally connected by the bridge, they were finally able to meet. Soon after talking, they began to insult one another about their physical and mental strength, just then, someone from the ridged side threw a punch at one of the garden side people. 3 men from the garden side cast a magic attack like lightning killing the man from the ridged side...in that same day, a war has started.

It was 2 long years with the 2 sides fighting each other, the kings and the magistrates realized that hiding the problem will never work, the problem will need to be eliminated.

So now, there is still a war going on, when someone signs up, they will choose what side they will be on, and who they will serve. They can level up and join the invaders attacking the other side, or they can settle down, start a farm, or build a house, it's up to them. But in this game, you can even take over towns, say you are from the ridged side, you can round up some of your high-level friends, and storm into the garden side and take over a small town in the name of the ridged side(it will say that you now rule the town), and as long as you can keep that town, it's yours.

^So, what does everything think of this?^