New Storyline - Criticism (constructive) welcomed.

[Drummerpete]

_    In the beginning of time, there were Seven Gods. The God of Time, The God of Darkness, The God of Light, The God of Fire, The God of Water, The God of Earth and the God of Air. They created the Universe, and all life, including the land of Ansrial.
    But, eventually, disputes broke out between the Gods. They all believed they were better than the others. Alliances of Good and Evil arose.The Gods of Fire, Darkness and Wind devised a plot to destroy the universe. They sent minions of Darkness, Fire and Wind into all the lands, in an attempt to end all natural life.
    Evil creatures are roaming free in the land of Ansrial. The inhabitants of the land need to destroy the Evil, so that Good can once again prevail in the land._

This is a work in progress.
Let me know what you think.