A map from my game

[Antisora]

All critizism is welcome, map is in attachments
Its the base camp where you start out.

[Frosty]

Try adding some plants ect in the open grass.

[Antisora]

@Frosty:

> Try adding some plants ect in the open grass.

I added trees :D

[Frosty]

Add some tall grass, maybe a puddle, some flowers, leaves ect, make it interesting.

[Antisora]

Added a puddle, some flowers
NOTE: there are NPCS on my map, im using screenshot option

[IdoFreePixel]

make the grass/pound a different shape, a square and a rectangle isn't the way to go.

[Antisora]

@IdoFreePixel:

> make the grass/pound a different shape, a square and a rectangle isn't the way to go.

If you mean the dirt walkways, it isnt just a square. i have seperate corner pieces,

[IdoFreePixel]

@Antisora:

> If you mean the dirt walkways, it isnt just a square. i have seperate corner pieces,

make the **grass/pound** a different shape, a square and a rectangle isn't the way to go.

the dirt walk way could use some help too, doesn't have to be so straight like that.

[Antisora]

@IdoFreePixel:

> make the **grass/pound** a different shape, a square and a rectangle isn't the way to go.

Ok then, whats a grass/pound?

[IdoFreePixel]

@Antisora:

> Ok then, whats a grass/pound?

ah typo, grass/pond

[Antisora]

@IdoFreePixel:

> ah typo, grass/pond

Oh, change the shape of the pond, ok. here's the new result:

[IdoFreePixel]

I was going more for this.

[dxxknight]

yeah when mapping outdoors you should be a little more Random with placing things like what pixel said and showed you. Also you are going to want flowers and other plants placed around to give that more natural feel.

[Antisora]

@IdoFreePixel:

> I was going more for this.
> 

Oh, sorry D:

Here, this is the map using what you want:

[Antisora]

MOST UPDATED IMAGE

[dxxknight]

not quite your paths still seem unnatural they are way to straight.

[Antisora]

@dxxknight:

> not quite your paths still seem unnatural they are way to straight.

Sorry, i forgot to tell you guys this: My game is about a war thats been going on for 100's of years, and this base camp has been there for awhile. so paths are going to look unnatural for a reason.

[IdoFreePixel]

@Antisora:

> Sorry, i forgot to tell you guys this: My game is about a war thats been going on for 100's of years, and this base camp has been there for awhile. so paths are going to look unnatural for a reason.

If its old it should actually not look like that then, the earth changes and so does the ground; therefore it should still look unnatural.

[Duders]

Ummm. I really want to be nice, but that needs a lot of work.

Try and add some more plants and I agree, the path needs to be more jagged to look natural.

If you need some help:
[[Mapping] Detail in Mapping](http://www.touchofdeathforums.com/smf/index.php/topic,72882.0.html)
[[Mapping] Clean and Simple RMXP Mapping](http://www.touchofdeathforums.com/smf/index.php/topic,72859.0.html)