Would like feedback

[DrNova]

a song i wrote, just curious for feedback. i guess its more of a poem since i have no music, but its supposed to be a song.

> -Chorus-
> To a bus full of people
> I'm just a guy walking down the street
> Another voice they will never hear
> Another guy they will never meet
> Forgotten part of their own journey
> Another bit of the scenery
> To a bus full of people
> I'm just a fleeting memory
> –------------
>
> Will someone glance outside
> as they pass and notice me
> And wonder to themselves
> Is he on his own journey
>
> Where have those legs taken him
> what sorrows has he seen
> what tribulations has he known
> why is he walking on this street
>
> I wonder if they will wonder
> What kind of man could he be
> Is he alone on his travels
> Or does he have family
>
> Has his life been kind to him
> Or has he had to fight it through
> Does he know the taste of love
> Or has his heart been run straight through
>
> -Chorus-
> To a bus full of people
> I'm just a guy walking down the street
> Another voice they will never hear
> Another guy they will never meet
> Forgotten part of their own journey
> Another bit of the scenery
> To a bus full of people
> I'm just a fleeting memory
> -----------
>
> If they met me again one day
> would any of them stop and say
> I remember seeing him
> As I went my own way
> Will they stop and say hi
> or will they go along with their day
> Will they remember me
> After they have gone their own way

[Adamse]

hey, they are great lyrics, how long did it take you? n_n

this sort of thing is actually what i think about everyday. will people remember you, and i notice how I never remember other people being to busy in my own life.

[Anna Comnena]

Not bad, what type of music would go with it?

[DrNova]

Not really sure. I came up with it when I was walking home from work at 1am and a bus drove by. In my head the music was just some accoustic.