Me Gusta Posted April 28, 2012 Author Share Posted April 28, 2012 Kid:Adult:Adult Clothed:Adult Animation:That is my first attempt at spriting for PVO. Actually it's my first attempt at spriting. So pretty much all I want is for people to help me improve it so give your input. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Fuu Posted April 28, 2012 Share Posted April 28, 2012 Oh god, oh god, oh god, please, square off all the corners and move the legs one pixel further from each other.I really, really want to see how it looks.EDIT:Okay, I got over excited and did it myself.[](http://www.freemmorpgmaker.com/files/imagehost/#33ccbf8c64a40be697fed3abd8b6a3bd.png)Sorry, for real criticism, Like I said, the legs are bunched together, when they should be more relaxed and spread appart a bit more. The body is kind of large, and the arms are too small. The head is really squarish, and the hairline is messed up. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Me Gusta Posted April 28, 2012 Author Share Posted April 28, 2012 @SuperSake:> Oh god, oh god, oh god, please, square off all the corners and move the legs one pixel further from each other.> I really, really want to see how it looks.> > EDIT:> Okay, I got over excited and did it myself.> [](http://www.freemmorpgmaker.com/files/imagehost/#33ccbf8c64a40be697fed3abd8b6a3bd.png)> > Sorry, for real criticism, Like I said, the legs are bunched together, when they should be more relaxed and spread appart a bit more. The body is kind of large, and the arms are too small. The head is really squarish, and the hairline is messed up.Thanks that's the opinion that I need I'll use yours too learn from my mistakesEdit* Here is what I got using what you made only smaller(A kid form): Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Fuu Posted April 28, 2012 Share Posted April 28, 2012 o-o; I didn't mean to make it blocky to finalize your sprite, Lol. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Me Gusta Posted April 28, 2012 Author Share Posted April 28, 2012 @SuperSake:> o-o; I didn't mean to make it blocky to finalize your sprite, Lol.Well Honestly I like the way it is. I just want to know if there is anything else I can do to make it better. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Fuu Posted April 28, 2012 Share Posted April 28, 2012 Oh. Well, you should probably remove the pecs, and ribcage. You could probably add the pecs back if you did it right, but I'm not sure how to with the blocky set up. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Me Gusta Posted April 28, 2012 Author Share Posted April 28, 2012 I think you have a point, but with the walking animation they look amazing. I'll remove the pecs and ribs though. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Celiru Posted April 30, 2012 Share Posted April 30, 2012 blocky as fuck, but i like the style. very retro. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Urumil Posted April 30, 2012 Share Posted April 30, 2012 Could look funny in a walking animation. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Owen F Posted April 30, 2012 Share Posted April 30, 2012 the.. blockyness… looks goodthis might just be the best game ever.Oh wait it's relaxing bacon man nevermind.Ooooo.Nah just kidding but for some reason I like the style Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Me Gusta Posted April 30, 2012 Author Share Posted April 30, 2012 @Gamzee:> Could look funny in a walking animation.Actually I made the full sprite it doesn't look have bad….@Owen:> the.. blockyness… looks good> this might just be the best game ever.> Oh wait it's relaxing bacon man nevermind.> Ooooo.> Nah just kidding but for some reason I like the styleHa! thanks. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Urumil Posted April 30, 2012 Share Posted April 30, 2012 Show it? :D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Me Gusta Posted April 30, 2012 Author Share Posted April 30, 2012 @Gamzee:> Show it? :DMaybe. I was actually debating on that. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Imposter Posted May 1, 2012 Share Posted May 1, 2012 DO IT!! I want to see MORE!! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
hisherwin Posted May 1, 2012 Share Posted May 1, 2012 BoxBoxBox , Well kinda i can make some of those , Let me try … Box Box Box :D I like some Box Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Me Gusta Posted May 1, 2012 Author Share Posted May 1, 2012 Updated OP with walking animation! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
7Eleven Posted May 2, 2012 Share Posted May 2, 2012 I like the way this style is looking! Look at supersakes version and use his spacing for the legs, looks a little better in my opinion. Keep up the good work! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
shwamshwam1 Posted May 2, 2012 Share Posted May 2, 2012 @Relaxing:> > > > Are you wanting to have a black outline to give it a bit of a cartoony feel?If not you might want to have the outline a darker colour of the closest one to it.For example: The darker colour outline makes it seem a bit more realistic, but if you are going for the cartoony feel fair enough =3 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Me Gusta Posted May 2, 2012 Author Share Posted May 2, 2012 @SnowStorm:> Are you wanting to have a black outline to give it a bit of a cartoony feel?> If not you might want to have the outline a darker colour of the closest one to it.> For example: > > The darker colour outline makes it seem a bit more realistic, but if you are going for the cartoony feel fair enough =3I took your advice and added it to the walking animation because that's the style I'm using for walking. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Fuu Posted May 2, 2012 Share Posted May 2, 2012 The outlines make it look really cool. You animated it just how I thought you would.I got bored, and I animated my version also. It's got like 5 more frames than yours, because it wasn't made for anything. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
shwamshwam1 Posted May 3, 2012 Share Posted May 3, 2012 @Relaxing:> Adult Animation:> That looks better =3 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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